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Sweethearts Senryu
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Sweethearts Senryu |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Sweethearts  Innocence unwraps true beauty in a soft kiss as sweethearts embrace By Melissa P. Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Melissa, your beautiful love poems are always filled with such beauty and innocence and passion! (big hugggssssss) I love it, and the picture is sooooooo adorable! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you, Noah! Actually, it was your poem 'Sweetheart's Kiss' which inspired me!  "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
So sweet, and I love the picture. What a beautiful innocent kiss If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Melissa, This is just too cute and sweet for words. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Awwww! So sweet! So cute! The picture is perfect for this poem.. how ya do it chickie?:superchickie: I love it Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ahh, this is so sweet. And I adore those pictures of the children. Sandra |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Ms Monette, a "honey" sweet read, for sure! Willie B |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww this is so cute. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone It was fun to pen this senryu~The picture is entitled "His First Kiss" By Kim Anderson "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Melissa! This is so cool...I love the picture and the words are just perfect...great job!  Hugs Cindi |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that this was indeed fun to pen my friend. . .  wonderfully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
soft kiss is given lips meld in blissful duty innocence unwrapped Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow...sooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeet Thank you Melissa.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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