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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-21 01:55 PM




Sweetheart's Kiss
By: Noah Eaton
10/21/01

Welcome me into your arms under these gauze stars
Have your sweet eyes invite my heart
Wrap me against your bronze satin body
Seducing your lips with strawberries and cream
Quickening the beat of your feathery heart
Pulling me into you slowly, licking your luscious lips
Tracing sizzling caresses along your hips
Reciting spiritual serenades through every mellifluous moan
Opening your mouth and tasting your tongue
Honeybees suckling the honeycomb of your fantasies
Feeling my heart beat to your breast in tight caress
Bending your neck down, I glance deep into your crystal eyes
Stargazing every sexual smile in our heart's constellation
Embracing your lingering kiss in anticipation
Swaying to the melody of your beating chest
Laved deep in your passionate sunbeam
Melting into all your greatest dreams
Hummingbirds shiver in your every sensual whisper
Canaries blush to the eternal sonnets we appeal
Holding you to my heart, listening...wondering...singing
Promising you all of life's ecstacy
Lingering over your lips in sweetheart's kiss


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-21 02:07 PM


Dear,
I'll stand under your mistletoe any day. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-10-21 02:08 PM


Noah, you need to give some advice to the rest of the men of the world, what a romantic beauty this is!
Sandra

Denise
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3 posted 2001-10-21 02:31 PM


Very romantic! Beautifully and tastefully done!
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2001-10-21 08:15 PM


Whaow! I like this!
Romantic indeed.

Maree  

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5 posted 2001-10-21 08:22 PM


Beautiful, Noah.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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6 posted 2001-10-21 08:28 PM


Mistletoe Angel,

Ah such romance. I hope to have that some day from someone special.

                             Dawn

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7 posted 2001-10-21 10:31 PM


Now this is certainly sensual romance at its best!! Lovely poem Noah. You seem to be in better spirits the last few days. Glad to see it. Take care.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2001-10-21 10:36 PM



Noah, this is awesome and so sweet!  
I love this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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9 posted 2001-10-22 12:49 PM


Promising you all of life's ecstacy"


the kiss of life, and love, lovely indeed....  


Greeneyes~


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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-10-22 07:35 AM


Noah,

   Sweet romance! You write it so well! Just beautiful!

Hugs,
Tara

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11 posted 2001-10-22 09:59 AM


This is a beautiful romantic write. Thank you for sharing.
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12 posted 2001-10-25 12:22 PM


Sweetie, beautiful , romantic work. Your lady is very lucky. Really enjoy reading your poetry. Hope to find a love as true as yours.
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13 posted 2001-10-25 02:24 PM


WOW!!!  Good thing I was sitting down to read this one!  BEAUTIFUL Noah!  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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14 posted 2001-10-25 02:38 PM


Noah, my friend, Very sensual and romatic. Wanda
Domzi
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15 posted 2001-10-25 03:09 PM


This poem is very romantic in it's wording. Loved the read!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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16 posted 2001-10-25 04:11 PM


You know how to get a lot out of a kiss Noah...James
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17 posted 2001-10-25 04:41 PM


Sounds like a heavenly dessert. Enjoyed.

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