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With Tongue In Weak
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With Tongue In Weak |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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With Tongue In Weak ~*Marge Tindal*~  In the aftermath I try to speak Tears cascade with tongue in weak Dip of pen in ink of well tributes come from depths of hell Flask from cask of hearts in cry Tongue in weak of acts deny Ache of break no more can I take Blasphemous cacophonous the tones imply forget Tongue in weak tears of sever I cannot forget nor will I ever~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Don't forget you paint a nice pic yuh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
We bite our tongues in silence, remembering we must never forget, yet move forward to ensure things change so events like these won't keep happening in our 'civilized' world. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
EXCELLENT Marge!  this is great |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
no, we never should...never! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know how you feel, Marge. Great expression. No, we won't forget, ever. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the aftermath I try to speak Tears cascade with tongue in weak Dip of pen in ink of well tributes come from depths of hell =============================== sometimes we cant find the verbal words to speak the pain and fear felt... sometimes our poets pen can speak for the heart that is silenced by the losses. You stir up many emotions with this powerful write Marge...I can feel your strength and fight....... "mad feels better than sad"  AWESOME picture!! This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I read all the comments as well as your poem and as I too am in a place of anger, but trying to move on, I find it even hard to find the words to convey the feelings inside of me but know I have to move forward in order not to be stuck in a place where these terrorists would want me to be. Marge, an excellent write, which I fully relate to, and the graphic also says a lot, for at least that is all I see when I open my eyes, as it is always in the back of my mind. Just a fabulous poem. Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--no words..just big hug! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Joining you in a hug and understanding that it is up to us all to make sure we never forget. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, we won't ever forget....ever! Thank you dear lady. Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I agree, gentle keeper, for apathy strikes and we do not feel we should infringe on the rights of others to their beliefs, but I tell you true, get with it or get out, for our country is at war, do not let this be another Vietnam of which we are ashamed to be an American. I don't worry about offending, I don't worry about saying, this is our flag, this is our country, these are our dead, be of support or seek other countries where you would be more welcome. Hang in there, Little Goose, the fire burns..very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Marge, this is so so true, and my heart will always cry out to the families and innocent civilians affected by this tragedy. (big hugggssssss) Your golden heart shines with true love and compassion, sweet friend! God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I couldn't say it better than Logan did if I tried... so I'll just compliment you on merging perfect words and a compelling picture in a great presentation. There IS no excuse... and I will NOT forget. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Marge... |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Bump in patriotic thought. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Marge, I never forget..  I still cry every now and then about it! Unfortunately we have to move on with our everyday lives...thanks for this wonderful tribute to help us all to never forget!Big hugs Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Sharing the sorrow and remembering with you, sweet friend. I love you~ Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Marge, I know that my daily life has changed since September 11th. As I used to enjoy the serenity of not having the tv on much, we don't dare not have it on to chance missing special announcements. Dawn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My appreciation to those who understand that moving on is not an option for me yet ... standing the vigil with the families of those still missing, remembering each day with them is what I must do~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My fingers spoke what my lips could not~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my....chilling! |
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