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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-10-21 01:01 PM

Comes now the night
as light of day
to darkenss yields,
a soothing calm
from mountain's peak
to golden fields.

Upon the wings
of whispered wind,
sings vespertine,
a madrigal,
a lover's waltz,
will you be mine?

Sweet satin kiss
upon the brow
'mid evening's mist,
I taste your lips,
I hold you close
in lover's tryst.

As one we dance
in love's ballet,
while god's above
in chorus sing
of passion's fire;
or Eros' love.

O' precious Rose,
I gaze upon
your unmatched splendor,
and cede to you
eternal love,
my heart's surrender.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

1 posted 2001-10-21 01:02 PM

This is very soft, I enjoyed the feel of it...thank you!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2001-10-21 01:09 PM

you the man with poet plan and i likes this one alot

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-10-21 01:17 PM

Wow, this is beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-10-21 02:06 PM

MY GOODNESS....gasp...wait a sec, lemme wipe off these sweaty palms...

There, that's better.

Totally mesmerizing and a lovely dance of words here...this is the kind of thing a lady wants written for HER, okay, at least read to her. At a picnic. A PRIVATE picnic.