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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-10-21 03:30 AM

I keep these feelings bottled up
For I’m not allowed to speak
And if I were to let them loose
You’d think that I were weak

Bottled up and vacuum sealed
Where no one hears me scream
To let the feelings drip till dried
Seems only a distant dream

Then I twist and hear the fizz
As my depression starts to sink
I drain the thoughts and read the cap
“You've just won another drink”

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-21-2001).]

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

1 posted 2001-10-21 05:11 AM

I hope your emotions/feelings/experiences are eventually able to be aired, & that the top remains on the bottle.

I've found writing and reading poetry a really helpful form of therapy, when mixed with professional help!

Jon

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2001-10-21 02:00 PM

Hey Walt,
How many drinks is that?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-21 02:04 PM

Hehe, over 4,000 drinks too? o yuh
Looks like you are a winner every day.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2001-10-21 08:31 PM

so what kind of drink have you won? do you ever get, "try again" to let your feelings out and be heard. gr8 topic, well sed fred

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2001-10-21 09:43 PM

Walt you're gettin' real good at this!

Let it rip buddy!

Can only be an "instant winner" if the feelings drain from that bottle and are heard.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2001-10-22 12:58 PM

wwoooohooo keep um coming....LOL nice write....be well....

Greeneyes~

****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-10-22 06:59 AM

I am following your thoughts..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-10-22 07:18 AM

Hey Walt, even though that was a good chuckle at the end, I felt the seriousness behind it. Or is it just me, feeling that way? Liked it lots, either way.
Sandra

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2001-10-22 07:21 AM

Walt send me a quart and I'll answer all your questions! Great write Walt!

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

10 posted 2001-10-22 07:08 PM

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