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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-10-21 03:02 AM



The biggest cantaloupes
The perkiest watermelons
Grapefruits round and ripe
Look at how their swellin’

Oranges...coconuts...
Everything’s set up right
Heck I even dig the feeling
Of those pesky skeeter bites

Drive your car and where you park it
You’ll find these things at the farmer’s market

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-21 03:08 AM


And lucky you...it's about time to visit the pumpkin patch too! ROFL...WITH  's
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2001-10-21 04:20 AM


now I never thought of that yuh but how weird and awkward would it be if I met Linus there yuh!
Grubbymitts
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3 posted 2001-10-21 05:34 AM


Always fun to walk past a woman in a supermarket who is inspecting a couple of melons and say "What a fine pair of melons you have there, love!" usually I either get hit by the husband of said lady or by my wife.

Great poem. or..

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA ETC.

Grot, Grub 'n' Grime - poetry for the undiscerning.

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4 posted 2001-10-21 08:32 AM


Hey Walt!! Are there a couple of peaches on that grocery list of yours? lol. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2001-10-21 09:54 AM


They didn't have any bananas? ROFL!!! Didn't see the friut section I'm over in the veggies! LOUDLY LAUGHING~

Sincerely,
Regina

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6 posted 2001-10-21 10:14 AM


Wayoutwalt,
That's a wayout poem, enjoyed

elisaseyes
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7 posted 2001-10-21 12:24 PM


you are so bad!
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8 posted 2001-10-21 12:58 PM


cute one walt...makes me think of the time my husband couldnt find
the cantaloupes after we got home ..he went back to the store and
complained...he got back home..and here they had rolled out of the
bag to the back of the trunk where we couldnt see them haa..
sooooo if you ever lose your cantaloupes...check your trunk first ha..

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9 posted 2001-10-21 01:30 PM


Walt~
Very creatively comedic~
I'll bet you're a farmer's market regular~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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10 posted 2001-10-21 01:40 PM


Hehehehe nice twist, there, Walt!
Your wit always rocks!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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11 posted 2001-10-21 01:43 PM


Walt, you come up with the cutest stuff!
Thanks for livening up my day and giving me a chuckle hehehe.


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12 posted 2001-10-21 02:05 PM


Ha ha, yes, very good for a chuckle this morning.
Sandra

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2001-10-21 02:07 PM


Giving you all the big smiles you always give me yuh
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14 posted 2001-10-21 04:29 PM


*giggling wickedly* tongue tied....don't know what to say.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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15 posted 2001-10-21 04:36 PM


Plums...plums....don't see any plums...need to get the plums....where are they? Oh, over there....okay....OH YUH..gottem!
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16 posted 2001-10-21 04:55 PM


I just spit my coffee all over my keyboard  , where do you dream this stuff up?  Nevermind, the supermarket right?  Come to think of it, I am out of buns!!! Cute!

Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~

wayoutwalt
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17 posted 2001-10-21 04:57 PM


o yuh big smiles to all of you each and every one yuh
Dark Angel
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18 posted 2001-10-21 05:18 PM


Walty, I'm grinning from ear to ear!

So glad you're wayout ya know!

Maree  

cruz
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19 posted 2001-10-21 08:25 PM


very clever! and...once again, I want to enter your mind!  i guess the reading of your artwork will suffice.  quite interjetik!
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