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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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For all our flaws and known defects It’s a wonder how we still have sex At the rate we procreate You’d think we all had steady dates Everyone is twenty-nine Unless they are just twenty They all just want to drink and smoke Until they’ve done it plenty And some just write so rottenly Yes, I fall in that category As long as my heart is truly spoken Then I have a poet’s story Is it humble to refuse the name Of a poet-if my poem’s lame? See what I can do with just few words My sadness, my joy, it all is heard! Poet-eer And Poetess The cornerstones Of all that’s blessed I am a poet my heart is spoken I do not need a heart that’s broken I just need a quiet mind So the entire world will come and find Me… I am a beacon *A stinkin blinkin beacon!* * Taken from Rudolph the Red-Nose Reindeer (I think) [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
ROFLMAO!!!! This is indeed poetry at its finest. This made me laugh out loud (and the cat gave me a funny look). I'm going back to read again  And by the way, I am still 29, whaddaya mean ya don't believe me!!!If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
My eyes are so bleary that i thought you said ROLLING OFF THE TOMATO not ROFLMAO. HEHEH incidentally WUI stands for Writing Under the Influence...yuh yuh |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WaltSweetie, you are a dear friend to many of us here and the poetry you share with us each day touches our hearts many many times... Hugs2uMyFriendWalt *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are a poet of highest comedic form...so keep 'em coming! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YUH!! Good stuff Walt!! Nancy |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Easy does it! Writing under the influence is dangerous! Just make it safe to bed from the living room |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
the title is clever! some clever lines here... Poet-eer And Poetess The cornerstones Of all that’s blessed a really enjoy... I am a poet my heart is spoken I do not need a heart that’s broken I just need a quiet mind So the entire world will come and find Me… ...it's awesome how the flow is so fluid and then..."Me," jumps out at you. it sounds awesome. good job. but watch who you hang out with, 'cause they can influence you. wui. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we all search you out Walt...always an interesting write...even if WUI ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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