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Soul Confession..........A sonnet
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Soul Confession..........A sonnet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I search the stars for proper expression I reach into my soul for confession A way to write the words that make no sound A way to impart these emotions found Wanting only the eloquence of voice Trying to find an option, stunning choice Hoping somehow to gracefully impart This devotion to you, inside my heart Something magical, that will touch you deep Something special, that you will always keep Words like no others, once uttered before Words that speak volumes, of how I adore Words that say only, what is pure and true Words that say softly, how much I love you ~SEA~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, that is a well written sonnet. I enjoyed it much. good work lady.... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is very beautiful Sea very well written, with a nice flow even out loud  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! Your beautiful golden heart floods with magical true love and passion! (big hugggssssss) You always write love so well! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a beautiful love you must have. And a perfect sonnet to go with it. Sandra |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Susan, I love sonnets. Something I am still mastering. This is so beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Lovely, lovely, lovely~ *sigh* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Susan, you're a sonnet master now! This is expressed so lovely  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful piece of writing. It's amazing how difficult it can be to say I love you, particularly to say it in just the right way. Lovely sonnet Susan. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Words like no others, once uttered before Words that speak volumes, of how I adore I think you found them...from SEA to beautiful SEA. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A way to write the words that make no sound A way to impart these emotions found Wanting only the eloquence of voice Trying to find an option, stunning choice ================================== Words like no others, once uttered before Words that speak volumes, of how I adore ============================== very very cool turn of phrase and poetic intend here,this is gorgeous and cadence kissed. I'd have to say this is high on the list as one of your best.(IMHO) beautiful sonnet. This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Words that say only, what is pure and true Words that say softly, how much I love you Sea, the beauty of your expression here just held me in endless sighs and I must say2u hun this would make a magnificent romantic greeting card ThankU for a most enjoyed read Hugs2uSweetieSea *~coco~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, Wow. I can only pray to be this good at sonnets one day! Just beautiful! Wonderful! Muchly muchly enjoyed  Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sea, This is a truly beautiful write. Dawn |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Straight to the heart. You got me again. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow.....so wonderful and lovely. And you know what?.....I think you found those words you look for.....  Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have tried to read all your sonnets and I think I like this one the "very" best yet! I guess one has to be in love to write like this right? hah!Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan...this is a very beautiful sonnet. I just love it! Tis a keeper for me! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Susan, a tender and loving Sonnet. love it! Maree |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Wonderful. I love sonnets and you have done a magnificent job with this one. BRAVO!!! I love it.....it touches the heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much...it means a lot to me, as this one is special to me. Thank you so much ~SEA |
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