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Tim
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0 posted 2001-10-20 10:12 PM


Andy, Opie, and Aunt Bee,
Went on a picnic, yes sirree,
Barney too, he wore his gun,
In his pocket, had bullet one,
Gomer Pyle, he came along,
He and Andy sang a song,
Otis staggered by and by,
Beneath a searing, Mayberry sky,
A sun so bright, without some lotion,
Skin would burn, I have a notion,
Then came the barber, and Howard too,
Sat for hours, 'neath sky so blue,
Then Andy said, we best be going,
Before skin burns, red starts to showing,
I fear too late, to burns avoid,
My skin's on fire, yelled out PINK FLOYD.

© Copyright 2001 Tim - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-20 10:16 PM


LOL this is great, I grew up on that show....
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2 posted 2001-10-20 10:30 PM




(smiles) I love Pink Floyd; my dad grew yp listening to them always! (big hugggsssssss) What a wonderful time it must have been! (smiles) Very clever and fun-filled poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-10-21 02:09 PM


LMAO....you have to see my other reply to understand why! (This ISN'T exactly what I had in mind...) But funny, and I LIKE funny!

(serenity exits, cackling...)

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4 posted 2001-10-21 02:18 PM


Tim,
An enjoyable read.

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5 posted 2001-10-21 02:58 PM


Tim,
You got the spirit of Mayberry down! LOL

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6 posted 2001-10-21 03:08 PM


Unique, funny and Mayberry.  Great combination.
The Lady of Shallot
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7 posted 2001-10-21 04:02 PM


I love that show!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
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8 posted 2001-10-21 05:43 PM


*giggling* I too grew up with this show...and you have captured it perfectly. Well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-10-21 11:50 PM


Mayberry and Pink Floyd. Now there's a combination. Cute

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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