Open Poetry #16 |
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Mayberry Picnic |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Andy, Opie, and Aunt Bee, Went on a picnic, yes sirree, Barney too, he wore his gun, In his pocket, had bullet one, Gomer Pyle, he came along, He and Andy sang a song, Otis staggered by and by, Beneath a searing, Mayberry sky, A sun so bright, without some lotion, Skin would burn, I have a notion, Then came the barber, and Howard too, Sat for hours, 'neath sky so blue, Then Andy said, we best be going, Before skin burns, red starts to showing, I fear too late, to burns avoid, My skin's on fire, yelled out PINK FLOYD. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL this is great, I grew up on that show.... ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I love Pink Floyd; my dad grew yp listening to them always! (big hugggsssssss) What a wonderful time it must have been! (smiles) Very clever and fun-filled poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
LMAO....you have to see my other reply to understand why! (This ISN'T exactly what I had in mind...) But funny, and I LIKE funny! (serenity exits, cackling...) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, An enjoyable read. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tim, You got the spirit of Mayberry down! LOL |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Unique, funny and Mayberry. Great combination. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I love that show! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I too grew up with this show...and you have captured it perfectly. Well done. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Mayberry and Pink Floyd. Now there's a combination. Cute If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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