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You Entice Me
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You Entice Me |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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You Entice Me You are what I have been waiting for The love in my heart faithful and pure Filling me with this joy and peace My love filled soul having its release Your love completes my very being My once blinded heart is now seeing How tender, warm, and soft love can be Your love is the answer to my plea I live for your sweet and tender kiss And your loving ways I’d surely miss For your love I would pay any price Such tender love your sweet words entice I am so lucky to have you here I promise to always hold you near. For my David who I love more than any words could ever say  Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is so sweet and romantic! (smiles) Your loving promise shines from your sweet golden heart and he will always be so lucky to love you. (smiles) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RP~  you know, this is so gorgeous! Your romantic poetry is lovely |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
heh. what you don't know is i invited the guys and girls of SND.net to come look at this too, hehehe. i love you right back, dear  oh wow that smiley reminds me of something else i should give you by way of reply to this  you're beautiful, dear, as always; my efforts feel clumsy and crude after reading your work. I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Such sweet replies you give. Thank you.. I'm glad you liked  SEA - I'm getting better at these sonnets huh? lol. I'm glad you enjoyed Dave -  Behave!!!! *chuckles* I'm glad you liked it dear. You inspired it.. thoughts of you lingered in my mind as I wrote this. Love you Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so lovely. And seeing the subject in the replies, just makes the story that much sweeter. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this poem rocks me slowly a nice write yuh |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tracey - I'm glad you liked it I'm a lucky gal  Thanks for stopping in.wayoutwalt - Thank you for coming in.. and I'm glad you enjoyed Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Tara, I particularly love sonnets and I have to say that this is the best of yours I've had the pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful and sincere RP. Oh man, I wish I was going to Texas with you, their are definately some special men in Texas!! *w* Nice write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Michael - Thank you for stopping in.. and for your help. These sonnets are challanging... and without your help they wouldn't turn out as they do. I'm glad you like Gentle Spirit - *chuckles* Yes there are some great men in Texas. Yay for me that I have the best Thank you for stopping in.. I'm glad you enjoyed Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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