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Passionately
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Passionately |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Needing distraction from you I try to write but then there you are Standing in a corner of my mind alone and sad So I write about you How you made me feel how you make me feel Silently taking all my feelings and bringing them uptodate Picturing us kissing my love Slowly in tears missing you Knowing we can't be together because we loved passionately because we hated passionately |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A great view of inner- turmoil, passion has that bite. It seems that which we run from the most is always within our sight. The first thought is can the love withstand hatreds might. Or is the real love the love of constant fight. A good read and honest heart ..., my thoughts are with you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!A poem filled with both sides of passion. Well done. A very interesting and good read. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) A wonderful poem about the pleasurable and painful sides of passion! (big hugggssssss) To nurture passion and understand it is what makes the love real. (sigh) Your golden heart shines with true pure love, dearest walker! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Some are just not meant to be...Until one changes. Nicely said. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The opposite side of a coin...is exactly that. Good one, walker. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, that last part really comes out and whacks the reader. Totally unexpected. Sad thoughts, but written well If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh well said |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
walker - oh yes, passion's many faces. How well I understand this poem. Very well said, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
sometimes even writing doesn't help...but yes, I know what you mean -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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