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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-10-20 03:23 PM


Moon Over Hawaii

Continue to speak
words of love to me
on this warm Hawaiian
night.

Kiss me constantly
as gentle trade winds
sway the palm trees
in the soft glow
of silky moonlight.

I will treasure
these moments forever
as we embrace
in kiss goodnight.

May we memorize
each others touch
til our hearts
bring us together
again in mornings
light.

JamesLee
October20
2001


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-10-20 03:33 PM


This is beautiful James....and oh so *sigh* romantic.  Lovely read this afternoon here in the cool of autumn.  ~hugs, Nancy~


  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2001-10-20 03:36 PM


ohhhh James what a beautiful night, can I join you in this soft glow of silky moonlight *sigh*

Charisma


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3 posted 2001-10-20 03:44 PM


*sigh* so incredibly romantic. Romance in the moon light. I have been told how beautiful Hawaii is and I bet it is pure magic at night. *sigh* I love this poem and the beauty it gives my vision.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-10-20 03:58 PM


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5 posted 2001-10-20 04:18 PM


refreshingly romantic read here.

                              Dawn

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6 posted 2001-10-20 06:09 PM


JamesMichael - Aloha, and this is very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2001-10-21 12:35 PM


JamesMichael~
Very romantically done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

Tracey
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8 posted 2001-10-21 12:40 PM


Ah, methinks romance has found you James. It looks good on you!!!  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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9 posted 2001-10-21 02:18 AM


o yuh perfecto
The Lady of Shallot
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10 posted 2001-10-21 08:42 AM




How wonderful!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

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11 posted 2001-10-21 05:46 PM


enjoy
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-10-21 06:02 PM


James,
A very nice write, enjoyed.

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13 posted 2001-10-22 01:04 AM


May we memorize
each others touch
til our hearts
bring us together
again in mornings
light"


oh wow, this is so beautiful....very lovely imagery, and heart...    be well


Greeneyes~


******


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-10-22 02:09 AM


Wow, James. This is cool! and romantic!
It's a good thing I didn't read this one right after Marge's Moonbeamer.(LOL
You've been to her pumpkin patch!)
anyway, this one is really good.  

arthur
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15 posted 2001-10-22 11:50 AM


from grey wet england
that is just a lovely picture to share
Arthur

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16 posted 2001-10-22 12:12 PM


Awe!!! James this is beautiful! Makes me remember the wonderful moments of my honeymoon so long ago...thank you!
Hugs
Cindi

vlraynes
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17 posted 2001-10-27 03:45 AM



JamesMichael-
   You're such the romantic.
   Very beautifully penned, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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