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Startime
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0 posted 2001-10-20 11:34 AM


Soaring

Soaring in the clouds,
freedom feeds his wings
Warm winds soft caresss,
words of beauty sings

Searching from the skies,
floating in free flight
His eyes clearly find
that which does delight

Valley far below,
all his senses scan
Welcome he finds there,
in a gentle land

Quickly he descends,
comes amidst us all
Taken from the world
to answer this call

Fine words he does share,
with all gathered round
For he finds such peace
in this world he's found

Magic in the air,
from the heart it spins
Words caress the soul,
free flight now begins

Soar amid the clouds,
breeze beneath your wing
Share with us your voice
in the poems you sing

Karen Torbiak 2001©




Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-20-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
WindWalker
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1 posted 2001-10-20 11:37 AM


WoW you have me Soaring This was Great!!!!!!!!!!!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-20 11:42 AM




(smiles) Such an uplifting poem of spirit and grace! (sigh) I remember this tribute really well you made for dearest Falcon! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You this new day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-10-20 11:45 AM


Karen,,,,you are writing superbly today...
this is a very beautiful poem.  A nice read
to start one's day with.

rwood
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4 posted 2001-10-21 09:33 AM


I'm flying...this dives right into my heart. Wonderful!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2001-10-21 09:52 AM


This is just lovely. Just like all you write. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you Startime for sharing your poetry.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-10-21 10:11 AM


Startime,
A delightful write, I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-10-21 10:43 AM


nicely done..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



walker
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8 posted 2001-10-21 10:46 AM


Very beautifully done.
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