Open Poetry #16 |
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Soaring |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
Soaring Soaring in the clouds, freedom feeds his wings Warm winds soft caresss, words of beauty sings Searching from the skies, floating in free flight His eyes clearly find that which does delight Valley far below, all his senses scan Welcome he finds there, in a gentle land Quickly he descends, comes amidst us all Taken from the world to answer this call Fine words he does share, with all gathered round For he finds such peace in this world he's found Magic in the air, from the heart it spins Words caress the soul, free flight now begins Soar amid the clouds, breeze beneath your wing Share with us your voice in the poems you sing Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WoW you have me Soaring This was Great!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Such an uplifting poem of spirit and grace! (sigh) I remember this tribute really well you made for dearest Falcon! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You this new day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen,,,,you are writing superbly today... this is a very beautiful poem. A nice read to start one's day with. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm flying...this dives right into my heart. Wonderful!!! Sincerely, Regina |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just lovely. Just like all you write. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you Startime for sharing your poetry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, A delightful write, I enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautifully done. |
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