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Truth Don't Rest Here No More
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Truth Don't Rest Here No More |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Some are going to hate Some are going to plot Everyone's going to love you? I think not I've been betrayed three times in less than five months They were supposed to be close But they snatched my belief and threw my trust inside a hearse Since the trust is gone Those who cross my path Evaporate from my presence quicker than liquor in an open flask So every now and then I visit my dearly departed truth And I curse the day my vulnerability decided to get the best of me As angry tears fall my heart bursts... Are there any feelings left inside my body? I thirst for my truth Without it no one holds any meaning towards me. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Domzi~ 'As angry tears fall my heart bursts... Are there any feelings left inside my body? I thirst for my truth' This feels so raw and tender~ Good emotional streaming~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You wrote of anger well, and I see you are from New York, so keep writing my friend, and I shall be here to read it. Very well done! ~* A smile is just a frown turned upside down *~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
maybe truth is really a series of tiny whitelies..I am beginning to think so myself ~Wynter |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Thank you Marge for always replying sweetly to my poetry. Nakdthoughts and Mysteria, I enjoy your poems as well. Thanks for your thoughts. Much Love Dominique As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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