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The Wild And Angry Sea
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The Wild And Angry Sea |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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An abundance of white caps Spread their way across the sea So many dark and ominous clouds How very threatening they seem to be The seagulls hover in slow motion As they struggle above in flight From the warmth of my vehicle I admire this amazing sight So comfortable and warm am I As I watch the winds lash the shore So much beauty to behold here As I've seen so many times before Even the cold unforgiving winds Can't keep me from the sea As I witness these acts of nature There's no other place I'd rather be A place to collect my thoughts An inspiration when I write A favourite place for lovers On a spectacular starry night How we'll admire the constellations As we walk slowly hand in hand How you'll kiss me so very passionately As our hearts will take command The early morning light Will find us in each others arms As you lure me oh so effortlessly With your love and all its charms Suetang |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Turbulence gives to passion as the sea gives to life ... there is a necessity of uncontrolled mystery needed to keep life fresh and unique. I truly enjoyed your writing and shall look forward to more. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I love the sea and the images in this..made me want to return. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love the sea and miss it so much. Even though I love the magic of the mountains the passion of the sea will always call out to me. I love this poem. It gave me a memory to hold on to. Thank you, so much, for sharing it with me. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
The early morning light Will find us in each others arms As you lure me oh so effortlessly With your love and all its charms" FANTASTIC  [This message has been edited by OctoberSky (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes if only the sea could lap just on the other side of the mountain here. That is if no one was washed away because of it. Such wonderment and tranquillity in the sea. You expressed that so fully in this. You live within beauty! Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, beauty and romance. Two things that go so perfectly together. And I think you've married them very well together here Sue. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I love the sea ever so much too. I always dream of the most beautiful things when I am laying on the beach sand; falling in love with a mermaid, discovering the beauty of Atlantis, and just being there on the sand makes me feel so comfortable and peaceful! (sigh) Your beautiful words whisper loves beauty in every tidal wave of emotion in this gorgeous poem! (big hugggsssssss) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
The title brought me in, but the sentiment took me to yet another Happy Place. Thanks Melton |
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