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How Sad........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It’s a form of torture A mental suicide It makes me turn away run and hide Your memory slams into me The violence rushes through And I am trapped remembering The cruelty that came from you I wish I could remember something happy To help erase this anger that I feel I wish I could think of just one sweet thing So this pain could heal How sad that I can’t even find One single memory One good time shared Just you and me I sit and let the tears roll down my face Wondering one more time, why Rocking myself back and forth I let the past once again, die ~SEA~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Big, warm hugs, gal. Let the memory die, and while it is dying, remember you cannot be harmed again. If you ever need 6'4" of pure Texas stampede, you just call yore guy pal  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, unfortunately, most all of us have some part of our past that we each would like to let die. I like the rythm of your poem. the content is great, and sadly, too often true. I hope you are not experiencing this right now. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Goodness, Susan, how very, very sad this is, sweetie. Warm (((hugs))) to you, sweet friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper, you are so dear...thank you for that....it matters, a lot  Magnus, it is a part of my past, but sometimes the fear surfaces, and I deal with it, I'm ok though, thank you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael, thank you sweet friend (((hugs))) right back |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan, You know it hurts me to see you so sad. Hope all is well... even though I did enjoy the write. ~hugs, Nancy~
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 Honey, when painful memories come haunting you, light a candle. Let that flame light your thoughts and find peace in the center of it. There is nothing that can stop us from remembering, but sometimes the comfort and peace that we see and feel from a candle can make us feel the past is not so dark. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sea...I am glad this is in your past...may it totally disappear soon...you have wonderful flow in this....good read ... alan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy~ the best part about all of it, is that it's over thanksTLoS~ thank you, that is so nice of you, I will Alan~ thanks, you are great |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear one....I know how the pain can surface bringing back dark memories. My heart goes out to you for I also know how hard it is to put them aside and move forward. You have done a wonderful job in trying to put the past behind you and it shows in every word you write. Take care, dear one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Karen, I am doing good just sometimes I can't stop the memories....but they are fading |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Good to hear the memories grow dimmer all the time. And that you have someone so special now to help with that Well said, Sea. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
let them fade and know tomorrow will be better** [This message has been edited by OctoberSky (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, my heart cries out to the sorrow in your heart! (big hugggssssss) Your golden heart is filled with so much love and deserves so much more than what has happened. (sad sigh) My heart is with you and I pray for the greatest love and joy for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
So sad Sea....so sad that we ever have to experience cruelty. I know that it made me a different person...One that will ensure it to never happen again. But there will always be some small snap of memory..here and there..but it won't rule you...a loving heart. Sincerely, Regina |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am glad you are not in this situation, now. And I hope the memories fade quickly for you. I have alot of bad memories myself. Every now and then, they do come back. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah Susan, this is such heartfelt writing. I know what you mean, about these feelings rising to the surface sometimes. But it sounds like you have a certain perspective on it, and that's good If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Memories can be a haunting and lonely thing and usually surface when you least expect them to. My thoughts are with you... it might be in the past and over but the pain is still very well felt... as I (and everyone) well know. Hugs to you until you work your way through. Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes we have to hold on to the worst tightly, in order to let it go, fully... and completely. Well done, little one... |
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