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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-10-19 05:25 PM

Lying here, late at night
thinking of all the beauty I've seen
Places of long ago
Lush green fields, the white sands
Sunrises and sunsets
But nothing that can compare
to your radiant beauty
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
That touches your gentle lips
Oh my enchantress
How can it be so
That my heart, cold and hardened
By the harsh winter snow
You can melt with only your smile
Your voice, like a siren's song
Lifting my dark and lowly soul
to the heavens above
Oh how I long to touch you
To hold you in my arms
But a dark force holds me from you
Only able to love you from afar
But hope gets me through the day
And especially the night
That maybe one day,
I can gaze upon your beauty
To hold you in my arms
To touch your lips with mine
And that it would not be the last time
so hope guides me on
through the dark sea of turmoil
hoping to find my port of call
praying that it might be with you

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

[This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (edited 10-19-2001).]

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

1 posted 2001-10-19 05:27 PM

Oh my....this is so beautifully sad.....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-19 05:31 PM

But hope gets me through the day
And especially the night
That maybe one day,
I can gaze upon your beauty
To hold you in my arms
To touch your lips with mine
And that it would not be the last time
so hope guides me on

I hold onto that hope too...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-10-19 05:40 PM

I am not sure if the first word of line
7 is supposed to be The?  Otherwise,
this is very very good.  very romantic.
I could not have done it better....a nice
read.  thank you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-10-19 05:49 PM

You are full of desire to share that beauty...James

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-10-19 06:04 PM

So beautiful and romantic great poem.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-10-19 06:46 PM

Wonderful write from the heart

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-10-20 02:04 AM

Ah, what beauty, what romance. Lovely

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2001-10-20 02:07 AM

This poem is a gift of beauty.

"But nothing that can compare
to your radiant beauty
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
That touches your gentle lips"

Wow. That is so cool.

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