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. . . Slowly building us . . .
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. . . Slowly building us . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
loom of existence building one thread at a time weaving character ~*~ while being woven you were placed in the pattern inseparable ~*~ the shuttle passes left to right and back again slowly building us ~*~ Inspired by: To Weave a Spell of Seduction Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
warp, waft, threading life blending lines into the weave keeping us all warm |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper...so pleased to see you so inspired! Thank you....write on! ~Nancy
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - I liked this very much. I think that if we are not careful, and we tug too hard on that loose thread....no...that one there...yes, then our life's plan may just unravel in front of our very eyes. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually beautiful. I do not know how you manage to put such emotion into so few words but you do a magnificent job of it. I LOVE IT!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such a beautiful weave of thoughts Interloper ... each senryu distinctly unique in their own sentiments ... and brought forth wonderful imagery in my mind. Very nicely woven indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such beautiful words are woven from your golden heart! (smiles) Every loom contributes to another memory, another dream, another piece of life! (big hugggsssss) You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!!! love it very much Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done by the Great Voice of the Southland. . . when you're inspired Sir, you're inpsired!!! -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Awesome poem to say to much in so few words. I enjoyed the read. Red |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
excellent thoughts, interloper. Character is indeed created one thread at a time and is deeply woven into our lives..as is love for another. You put it together very well... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ Thanks for the warm fuzzies Enchantress~ It is I who thanks you for the fine piece that inspired Nightshade ~ Yes, I see it ... right there ... snip! Won't unravel now Startime ~ Golly, gee, shux. (sigh) Be still my heart! Kit ~ I try to be a good wordsmith but your compliments are too generous. Thank you from the bottom of my heart Noah ~ Wow! Hey, could you turn that into a prayer for me? Thanks loads Charisma ~ Why, thank you Now I know why they say beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And, in your case, the beauty is the beholder Sven~ A fine compliment, indeed, from the GR8 voice of the Northlands. Gee, and all this time I thought I was inspired Red~ Awesome? Golly, I appreciate that Balladeer ~ What a gracious and wonderful comment. Thank you SmartChick ~ Now I know you live up to your nick Thank you all for your time and fantabulous comments. You are the greatest! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Bump this one. Admiring you at Passions. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
loom of existence building one thread at a time weaving character so much is said in this beautiful piece. Loved the first stanza |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Interloper, So much said, so few words. Really liked this one. Dawn |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Tightly woven threads That silk the reflection soft Strong as surreal steel Great Craftsmanship! Exquisite. Sincerely, Regina |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
this is stunning, how did I miss this one! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper...You do know how to make a tender fit...beautiful! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Thanks for the bump AWC ~ I had hoped it would set the tone of the piece. I am so glad you liked it Dawn ~ I believe this is your first visit and I thank yoou for your time and your nice comment. Come back soon Regina ~ finely woven threads the strings of my heart and yours now beating as one Lady of Shallot ~ I dunno ... I'm glad you didn't 'cuz you just made my day Martie ~ That from the "tailor of tender fits" is one heck of a compliment. I am honored Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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