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Castaway Dreams
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Castaway Dreams |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Castaway Dreams Castaway dreams to far and distant lands of green country sides or white shimmering sands. ~*~ Only a vision in my eyes of clear turquoise water and lovely blue skies. ~*~ Spectacular coral reefs await under the ocean preserved through the years with silent devotion. ~*~ Of vales and dales with mountains devine wild flowers blooming.. in the warm sunshine. Endless rolling hills with vales below babbling brooks and streams.. their glistening waters flow. ~*~ A perception of loveliness each abode on the hill crafted and designed with percision and skill ~*~ Mountains in the distance snow upon their crests paints a perfect landscape of peace and rest. ~*~ Only a vision, my castaway dreams just a place I go for sweet extreems. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunshineMist~ This flows so easily~ Lovely cascading of thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Marge- thank you for those nice words. Dreams are great!  ~hugs Marie~smiles ~Marie~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Most excellent!! I could breath in the freshness of your words as I read. Powerful and Dreamy at the same time. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
If I were to cast away all of my extremes, I would hope they'd come to you just for a "once upon" dream Oh, I love to be inspired! Thank you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I wish all those dream scenes could become the reality. Thanks for a good peacefully flowing poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of a dream I had when I was a little boy living in Kentucky...I was walking down a long dirty alley with garages and trash cans and after a while the alley opened up into a beautiful meadow with flowers and trees and flowing streams and lakes and it was just a beautiful and peaceful place...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful! I too love to dream and muse all the time of the most beautiful places of love and nature, and lose myself in them. (big hugggssssss) Sweet sunshine and beauty fill your gorgeous words, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds gr8 |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
CTowen, Thank you so much for your kind words. Glad you took the journey with me. Lady in White, Thank you kindly. Glad that I gave you inspiration.  Midnitesun, Thank you and you are very welcome. James Michael, Thank you for reading and glad that I helped you to remember a dream. Interloper, Thank you kindly.  Noah, Thank you so much for those lovely words and for reading. big hugs to you too! Thank you all, smiles and hugs!  smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Now this is someplace I want to go. Not castaway at all but cherished and filled with the magic of your heart. I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
sunshinemist, I assume you keep that place handy. And I hope you know the way because I probably need some directions. Please. Thanks. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Startime, thank you for the read. Great spot I carry in my mind and I think they exhist somewhere! smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Larry C.- thank you for reading. Of course I know the directions! Only thing is I have to take a plane. smiles ~Marie~ |
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