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paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-10-19 09:38 AM

On to the Blue ridge mountains
High backyard of North Carolina
Across the fields of green tobacco
rolls the road west
Then through Durham with long sheds
of aged gold leaves behind her
Up the steps of low rolling hills
that flow from crest to crest
Next comes North Wilksboro
city of fast cars and moonshine likker
Outside Boone the road grows steeper
as the mountains become thicker
A trip to the mountains remains
forever in my mind
To see the breath taking vistas
and leave my cares behind

paladin

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-19 09:44 AM

*sigh* I live just east of the Rockie Mountains so this poem drew my eye when I saw the title. There is such a magic about mountains and to my vision your poem captured it taking me on a trip to the mountains nearby. Very well done. I love this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-19 09:55 AM

Paladin...next trip can I come??? Sounds beautiful and very interesting. Great write! Enjoyed...hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-10-19 04:47 PM

~Oh yeah. Soothing this is. *Peace, and thanks.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-20 12:23 PM

Ah, sounds like a lovely trip.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-10-20 01:16 AM

Paladin~
Oh YES ~
Great mountain area for sure~
I go to Murphy to visit friends~
The ONLY other place I've ever considered living~
BUT ... only 4-5 months out of the year ... too cold for this little Injun gal when the temperature dips below 55°~

Wonderfully wistful longing in your write~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2001-10-20 01:42 AM

Paladin,
Never been there, 'til now. Thanks for the trip. It was a pleasant journey. thanks.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-20 01:49 AM

Oh, what a nice easy trip this has been, through the backwoods, past the still stills. Keep writing paladin, you are really on a roll.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2001-10-21 01:39 AM

I like your nature mister 'din

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-26 04:55 AM

paladin-
   Oh...now you've got me itching to
   take a road trip.
   Enjoyed this very much...nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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