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WRBreezin
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0 posted 2001-10-19 07:13 AM



Replenish


Take away the hands
trembling a future's plight
long worries of moments past
quick suffering into the day

Show me the priceless twinkle
a shimmer stymied in vain
behind the prison gates of tears

Replenish this trumpeter's breath
one glance and the world is singing

One touch and the woman exposed
bare breast for supple palms soothing
and a kiss to drain all fears


Willie
©2001

© Copyright 2001 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved
rwood
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Tennessee
1 posted 2001-10-19 08:00 AM


If only......this could be. An Artists portrayal similar to the intellect and emotions of Rubens. He too painted pictures in sensual but luminous form. Simply Lovely.

Sincerely,
Regina

A Whisper's Caress
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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:38 AM


Willie,
You are quickly becoming a favorite.
This is outstanding writing, and you
do have a beautiful gift of expression.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-10-19 08:49 AM


WRBreezin,
Not a bad line, enjoyed

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-19 09:38 AM


You have said this by painting emotions into an art of words that touch your reader. Thank you for sharing it with me. Simply beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WRBreezin
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5 posted 2001-10-20 06:42 AM



Thanks folks, your comments are just great!

Willie B

Ps Regina, if only I were so gifted...Thank you!

rwood
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Tennessee
6 posted 2001-10-20 04:22 PM


I think this is splendid writing....so I read it again!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

WRBreezin
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7 posted 2001-10-21 07:39 AM



Thank you, Regina... I'm pleased to know you enjoyed another look at "Replenish"

Willie B

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