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WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

0 posted 2001-10-19 07:13 AM

Replenish

Take away the hands
trembling a future's plight
long worries of moments past
quick suffering into the day

Show me the priceless twinkle
a shimmer stymied in vain
behind the prison gates of tears

Replenish this trumpeter's breath
one glance and the world is singing

One touch and the woman exposed
bare breast for supple palms soothing
and a kiss to drain all fears

Willie
©2001

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-10-19 08:00 AM

If only......this could be. An Artists portrayal similar to the intellect and emotions of Rubens. He too painted pictures in sensual but luminous form. Simply Lovely.

Sincerely,
Regina

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2001-10-19 08:38 AM

Willie,
You are quickly becoming a favorite.
This is outstanding writing, and you
do have a beautiful gift of expression.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-10-19 08:49 AM

WRBreezin,
Not a bad line, enjoyed

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-19 09:38 AM

You have said this by painting emotions into an art of words that touch your reader. Thank you for sharing it with me. Simply beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

5 posted 2001-10-20 06:42 AM

Thanks folks, your comments are just great!

Willie B

Ps Regina, if only I were so gifted...Thank you!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2001-10-20 04:22 PM

I think this is splendid writing....so I read it again!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

7 posted 2001-10-21 07:39 AM

Thank you, Regina... I'm pleased to know you enjoyed another look at "Replenish"

Willie B

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