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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-19 06:01 AM

Reading My Mind

This was not the first time
she told me she liked me.
I always responded in kind...
"Yes I like you too."
She seemed to be reading my mind.
And yet I know that she believes that we
are completely different in so many ways.
For I have found myself living
in a large circle of female friends
and for many years raising her daughter
was her one and only plan
and as a woman completely dedicated to her daughter she found little time to share her day with a special man.
I felt like I could understand the words
she was hesitant to say.
That's when I said,
"Do you want me to go away?"
And that's when she said, "No...
I like you and I want you to stay."

JamesLee
October18
2001

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-19 06:29 AM

What a lovely direction this took in your closing James ... hope and anticipation for what might come, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-19 07:24 AM

Ah, this is sweet JM. She sounds like a lovely lady, and it sounds like there will be more poetry to come!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-19 08:39 AM

Sounds like there is romance in the near future for you. *grin* I can't wait to see what poems you come up with from it. There is nothing like the special poems of someone falling in love. BRAVO!!!I really like this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-10-19 08:46 AM

James,
Some times the direct line is the best. Enjoyed

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-10-19 12:11 PM

JamesMichael~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-19 12:40 PM

James, Very nice one!

Enjoyed.
~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-19 01:38 PM

JamesMichael - I love happy endings!! Well written. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-19 02:51 PM

JM...And they lived and loved happily ever after? Will there be more poems written about this lovely lady?...guess we will have to wait and see.
Good write!
~happy hugs, NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-19 03:03 PM

(smiles) So sweet and special this touching poem is! (smiles) May you both share a happy and wonderful future together! Beautiful, dearest James! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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with you

10 posted 2001-10-19 08:54 PM

James, very nice

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