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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-10-19 12:57 PM

Soulmate Of My Dreams

I close my eyes, and, I can see
visions of love for eternity,
kissed by dreams of enamored sleep
emotions stir, within, so deep
awakening within slumber, divine
blending with you...hearts entwine,
surrendering to fate in cupid's play
I wear luna's tears as lingerie,
in intense embrace, I thirst for you
impassioned by this bond, so true
soaring high through time and space
on erotic wings of moonlit lace,
through dance of sky, moving softly together
we caress on cashmere clouds of forever,
and our eyes, they shine with stars sublime
in this beautiful love to last for all time

By Melissa P. Monette

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-10-19 01:50 AM

Melissa,
Well, be still my heart. That is higher than I ever expected to soar. Nicely done.

Nature Girl
Junior Member

since 2001-10-19

Posts 31

2 posted 2001-10-19 03:01 AM

What an amazing image! Both given and created... this was so touching...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-19 03:40 AM

Wow, Melissa. Another love song.

"soaring high through time and space
on erotic wings of moonlit lace,"

Nothing to add to that, except, where can I buy some of that lace?

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-19 08:57 AM

Absolutely beautiful. The image fits your poem to perfection. Love flows perfectly through your pen. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-10-19 09:06 AM

Mellisa,
You are a true romantic. And this is one lovely poem. *L* Sy

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-10-19 11:50 AM

missy,

this is so
beautiful

how do you
constantly
come up with
these?

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-10-19 12:33 PM

This is a beautiful poem. And, the picture is perfect.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2001-10-19 12:43 PM

Wow Melissa, you have really out-done yourself! So beautiful I can't choose a favorite line.
It's all wonderfully romantic.

Deb

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-19 02:25 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! You paint the beauty and magic of love with such beauty and romance! (smiles) I saw sweet lovers carried off on wings of moonlit laces reading this! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

10 posted 2001-10-19 02:27 PM

Melissa,
The Queen of Romance Poetry Lives! You write so well of love and romance, how can you still be single? You must enjoy your research in preparing for these poems. WRITE ON FRIEND! Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-10-19 03:25 PM

Melissa, very well done! Lovely and oh so romantic. Good write, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-10-19 03:30 PM

Suggestions....I have one.....Take this poem
and lock it up somewhere....for it is surely a keeper. Very beautiful...

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

13 posted 2001-10-19 05:45 PM

Melissa; Another enchantingly romantic poem! This is so beautiful...save them all and read them to your one true love, because he's just around the corner, I'm sure!!! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

14 posted 2001-10-20 12:25 PM

Oh this is indeed beautiful and romantic. I want one of those soulmates too!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

15 posted 2001-10-20 12:51 PM

Melissa,

You're so amazing. Every time I read something you write it warms my heart and makes me smile. Again.. well done. I love this chickie.

Hugs
Tara

Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

16 posted 2001-10-20 08:47 AM

simply a smile for this one

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2001-10-20 11:18 AM

Oh my, this is so lovely, and so much how my heart feels. I missed all my poet friends while I was away..Thats the only good part about being home, I can get back on here..

Sandra

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

18 posted 2001-10-20 11:30 AM

well alright!!!!!!!!!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

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