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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-18 05:11 PM

As I watch, I wait and weave....

When I saw your face, I saw beauty beyond compare
I saw lips waiting to be kissed, caressed, touched
I saw eyes deep with desire, taunting me as I gazed spellbound.
I saw the line of a sensuous nose, waiting to snuggle my neck
I saw dimples so cute, showing a noticeable lover’s flush.
I felt hair soft, wavy, lusciously long, ready to cover my face.

I wanted to say long ago how immeasurably you have touched me.
I could not, for I was speechless, overcome with hope and love.
I wanted to tell you how you looked, how I loved the taste of you.
How your perfumed ears and neck totally enthralled and devoured me.

You excited me beyond my wildest imagined dreams of erotic love.
You left me breathing heavily as my hands shook and became damp.
Your silhouetted figure intrigued me, I felt I must look again.
Your voice eluded me, leaving me searching for words unheard.

I cannot forget the first day I saw you in my dreams, smiling, laughing.
Looking as though you knew I had been dreaming, lusting of you.
I stood there, an emotional love struck bag of male hormones, exploding.
My dream leaves as I arrive awake, memories tugging at my soul.
I feel the rumble of the wheels, the clack of the rails, coffee with cream.
A whistle blows, steam rises from a train, over the Rockies to the shore.
A tear falls down a cheek, missing the smell of salt air and sun as love
departs, saying goodbye.....

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2001-10-18 05:20 PM

Hang on while I catch my breath here....
Oh..um...sigh. Wow.
You have done it again, Magnus, and left me speechless (an amazing feat on it's own

)

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-18 05:28 PM

Your words inspire this poet to write and
write and write.....ttttthhhhhhhaaaaaaannnnnkkkkkkk you.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-10-18 05:35 PM

The further I read the more my interest increased. Your descriptive talent is impressive. Really liked this!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-18 05:38 PM

Wow, or should I say WHOA! That is so beautiful, Magnus. You must want to stay sleeping in the daytime with dreams like that.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-10-18 06:41 PM

Duncan.....I am happy that you enjoyed the
visuals and the read....I try hard to do
just that...sometimes I struggle, sometimes
I hit paydirt. Thanx.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-18 06:42 PM

Midnitesun, YEs,,,I certainly do wish that
I could do nothing but dream...Dreams can
be so nice....Thank you.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-10-18 07:12 PM

*sigh* I so do not like to say goodbye to dreams. This is romantically beautiful and was magnificent to read. Thank you for sharing it, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-10-18 07:43 PM

You are so giggling welcome....and may your
dreams be filled with wonderful things.
Thank you Startime.

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