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Fisherman's Dream
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Fisherman's Dream |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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Fisherman's Dream  Gentle waters trickle over rocks with soothing ease Slowly moving onward so clear and sparkling He steps onto the water's edge casting methodically Stillness interupted, whipping breaking the patterned stream Every movement complete with grace accomplishing every task He hears the rippling waters flow almost melodic with his act Peace and harmony all in one nature and man come clean Fulfilling the very passion of only a fisherman's dream Cpalmer God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears Cpalmer [This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I love to go fishing with my grandpa every time I visit him in Missouri; I love my grandpa so very much and every time we go, we will talk for hours about God and love and nature and how the weather is. (big hugggssssss) Peace and serenity is the joy of a true fisherman! (big hugggsssssss) Beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cindi, I've been there. But with far less skill than you or the fisherman. All my senses felt that experience again, thanks to you. Great job! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hear, hear...may we all share a little of t hat dream...fishing or otherwise. Wonderful CP... jwesley |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I remember I used to go fishing with my dad when I was a little girl. I used to get so impatient waiting to catch a fish lol. my dad was into fishing and then I stopped going with him because I got bored of it. Thanks for bringing back the memory : ) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You know there is something serene about this. It flows with a gentleness that I find soothing. Well done. You have put a gentle feeling to this wonderful poem. I LOVE IT!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Noah, I remember many a time fishing with my grandfather...I used to love the time we got to spend together...I will always cherish those moments! (biggest Hugsssss back!) I'm glad you like it my friend! Love ya Cindi Larry, Memories are a wonderful thing aren't they? I'm not that skilled when it comes to fishing either, but my husband seems to know what he is doing LOL....Thanks for the support! Love ya Cindi Jwesley I agree, we should all share in the dream...whether it be fishing or everyday life! Thank you! Hugs Cindi Rosepetal I used to go fishing with my husband til I got bored of it...Now my kids go with him LOL They have lots of fun and I think it makes wonderful memories of life! Thank you! Hugs Cindi Startime Thank you...I appreciate your input...soothing is how it felt to write it too! Whether fishing or just going through life..I feel it should be like this! Hugs Cindi |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Great poem, and an excellent photo. Wish I was fishing right now. lyl |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirksters, I'm sure you do...or sailing or something besides working right? LOL I'm glad you liked it! thanks for the bump! LYL Cindi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ Well ... just add this FisherWOman to those dreams~  Not much that compares to the action of fishing (if they're biting) or the serenity of it (if they're not)~ Right up my river with this one~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, fishing can be lots of fun...when they are biting...I guess I should like serenity of it when they are not, but sometimes I just can't get past the bugs (UGH!!) Oh well! I'm glad you like this!  Hugs Cindi |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hmmm what a wonderful sound, and what a gorgeous poem Maree. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful description of the place I want to be RIGHT NOW. Thanks for this one. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahhh Cindi, fishing. I was just doing that for the past two days, on trout, in a pond, we don't have that kind of beautiful running streams overhere. Great poem  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Titia, Thank you...I love the sounds of the flowing river and streams...I'm sorry you don't have those there  You are lucky you got to fishing though! Catch anything?Hugs Cindi |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a serene picture you paint with your pen. I only know one fisherman, my brother, and he's nothing like this. He's loud and boisterous and I think he scares the fish away, cause he never seems to catch anything!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very soothing poem o yuh |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
cpalmer, I used to go fishing with my Dad as well. I miss it a lot and hope to find someone to go fishing with again sometime. Dad no longer enjoys fishing. Dawn |
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