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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-17 04:29 PM

Timeless Moments
~*~
Near a spring, in a meadow of green
a girl sits alone with her memories,
as the white organdy dress floats in the breeze
and the sweet perfume of orange blossoms
mingle around her like honeysuckle’s
in the wind.
Softly her long brown hair blows in the wind,
distracting her with thoughts of a love
she longs deeply for in all her dreams.
Sounds like music of a great symphony
play across her mind as she
holds her book tightly to her breast,
sighing as sweet thoughts drift to
her love who flies around the world
and fights a war.
She wonders if he thinks of her in times of rest.
Will their love stand times test?
Will memories branded in meadows of green
on a warm summers eve
become a misty memory?
She'll return to this place on a hill
listening for his voice in the wind
longing to touch his lips again,
tenderly praying,
God once more,
let love be.

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 10-18-2001).]

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-17 04:31 PM

Would it be crass to say I wanna be the book in the poem-- nicely done yuh

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-10-17 04:59 PM

Walt~ Lol...I won't "go there", but glad you enjoyed the poem.

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-17 06:21 PM

Deb, That was beautiful! I just love those romance ones.

~hugs Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-10-17 06:28 PM

enjoy

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-10-17 07:44 PM

Ah....such a soft tender piece....blooming like a rose..
And the picture is just a perfect delicate choice.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-10-17 07:50 PM

A wonderfully romantic poem that whispers through the trees softly. Wonderful. I love reading of romance and this one fit me perfectly.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-10-18 04:06 AM

BloomingRose~
What beautifully written thoughts~
Tender, touching, delicate~
You're really good at expressing such emotion~

LOL !
Hey Walt ...
Would you settle for being 'The Best Poem She Ever Read' ?~
Walt crass ??? Perish the thought ! !

*Hugs*, Deb~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2001-10-18 08:18 AM

Marie~ Thank you, so glad you enjoyed the read.

Vandana~

Thanks.

Enchanted~ Romance and imagination was the mood of the day. Thanks

Startime~ Thank you, a little romance in the air is sometimes a much needed distraction from the harshness of the "real world".

Marge~ Thank you sweet lady. I think Walt would like to be the page in the book that came unglued.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-23 02:17 AM

Deb-
   I'm so glad I found this one before it got away.
   This is just beautifully penned, and
   filled with such heartfelt emotion.
   I always LOVE reading your lovely thoughts.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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