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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2001-10-17 10:59 AM


I have sight,
As almost everyone does,
I’m not blind
In my mind,
I can see what is and was,
I can see
You to me.

I have a sense of hearing,
All the words,
And song birds,
The music of self being.

I can touch,
Though not much,
Fingers feel when allowed to
So to clasp,
Lightly grasp,
Going about what I do.

Yet to have
Or not have,
Determined for ownership’s,
Do we have,
Or does from our senses slips;
And not have.

Gloom


© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
WindWalker
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1 posted 2001-10-17 11:38 AM


This was a good read!!!!!!!!!!
Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-10-17 11:43 AM



Turn on the light {~,^}....

good read!

You have much...you share more!

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 10-17-2001).]

Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2001-10-17 12:22 PM


Thank you, WindWalker,
Glad my words pleased your eyes.

Thank you, Lady in White,
Pleased you liked;
Giving is only worthwhile if there is someone
To receive.

Gloom

Zinsser
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4 posted 2001-10-17 01:38 PM


Gloom,
once again .... much enjoyed

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2001-10-17 01:40 PM


yep.... tight, thoughtful...and very well presented... nicely done indeed....


nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-10-22 06:01 PM


I love the way you write...and more

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2001-10-22 06:08 PM


Prof,
You have a style of your own. Enjoyed

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