Open Poetry #16 |
To Have or Have Not |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I have sight, As almost everyone does, I’m not blind In my mind, I can see what is and was, I can see You to me. I have a sense of hearing, All the words, And song birds, The music of self being. I can touch, Though not much, Fingers feel when allowed to So to clasp, Lightly grasp, Going about what I do. Yet to have Or not have, Determined for ownership’s, Do we have, Or does from our senses slips; And not have. Gloom |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a good read!!!!!!!!!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Turn on the light {~,^}.... good read! You have much...you share more! [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, WindWalker, Glad my words pleased your eyes. Thank you, Lady in White, Pleased you liked; Giving is only worthwhile if there is someone To receive. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Gloom, once again .... much enjoyed Thank You |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep.... tight, thoughtful...and very well presented... nicely done indeed.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the way you write...and more ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prof, You have a style of your own. Enjoyed |
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