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a taste for bitter sweet
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a taste for bitter sweet |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
weaving in and out and I’m crying out loud this love we’re moulding remnants of uncertainty when’s right or wrong I really don’t know many whites within our black or blind love piling to a stack? a potion of daring to dream is what you’ve given me yet can’t you see it’s maddening that I can’t love in totality some say our story is strange...yet fascinating but I would rather it be simply spellbinding till the arrival of an antidote to our intricacies our seeds of love will always reap fruits of bitter sweet [This message has been edited by cottage (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice write o yuh |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
beautiful poem Cottage...i enjoyed it alot..God bless and all the best, ~Ann~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
The interesting thing about love is that there is much to it that is bitter sweet. Gray areas where understanding and compassion need to rule the head instead of letting the heart dictate our feelings. BRAVO!!!!I pray there is little bitter sweet in this love you have and that your heart is filled with the soft joy you desire. Very well written. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cottage~ 'a potion of daring to dream is what you’ve given me' 'Daring to dream' is a gift sown~ Hoping you harvest sweet fruits of your dreams~ This is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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