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My Haven |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66
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Standing at the edge of the cliff, the wind whips my hair around my face. I look out above the clouds and I feel so serene and so relaxed. I smell the sweet salty air, I take a deep breath and when I release I let all the troubles and pains I have go with. The wind dies down and I cant remember the last time I have felt so composed. Reds, oranges, and yellows tantalize me; they look so beautiful so at Peace for a brief moment I get jealous and I wished I could be like them. The cool air wraps around me, how I longed to freeze this moment and keep it forever. I kick a rock and it falls off the side of the cliff, when I look down all I can see is the white wispy clouds dancing in the wind. As I look up something lightly brushes against me I turn around and there is nothing there, maybe it was my guarding angel letting me know that he was there watching over me. Turning around I take one more deep breath and let the smell of salt and water sit in my nose. I say goodbye to my Haven and walk slowly back to my life. [This message has been edited by Guardurthoughts (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Well done...I love to do that with storms..I release all my frustrations into the storm. Welcome to Passions. You will love it here. The poets are the best people you will find anywhere. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very lovely first post.  Welcome to Passions and it is nice to meet you. smiles ~Marie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sounds like you have a very lovely haven. Welcome to Passions, nice to meet you If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice first post! I'll be looking for more from you.  WELCOME TO PASSIONS ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo! Welcome to Passions. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Welcome to a fine and friendly place of peace. |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
Thanks Everyone for you welcomes and support I look forward to reading all of your writings! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Welcome to passions post more o yuh! |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
Great poem..i enjoyed it alot  God bless and all the best, ~Ann~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
welcome and know that the haven inside of you is always, always there! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
WELCOME TO PASSION'S  A wonderful piece you have written. I look forward to reading more of your work. Deb |
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