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Rains Fall On Sandy Shores
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Rains Fall On Sandy Shores |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Grayish clouds obscuring the sun’s golden rays. Breezes creating white tendrils across flowing waves. Salt air creating delicious smells and tastes. Love abound on the sands of a deserted shore. Footsteps wandering sporadically across dry patches. Disappearing with the receding tide of a beckoning sea. Birds stalking hidden morsels of crab and fish. Laughter drowned out from the crash of waves ashore. Smiling faces absorbing love through bright eyes. Walking side by side, sensually touching hip to hip. Feet tickled by waters caressing toes, splashing. Hands touching intimate places shared freely. The sound of a distant horn warning of a craggy shore. Lights of red, blue, green, rotating white. A lighthouse calling for lovers to unite once more. Truly a romantic and sensual sight. Running through dunes covered by grass. Hiding and peaking in anticipation of loves caress. Laughing while recklessly running away. Feigning the terror of the chase. Caught from behind by strong arms, whirling around. Giggling as kisses become part of one’s face. Tongues tickling and sharing a delightful taste. Gentle strokes of wind blown hair across a lover’s face. Caught by the gentle attack of rain driven tears from above. Running hurriedly to a place warm and dry. Crashing through the open door Falling and wrestling in a mock anger’s embrace. Two shadows again become one against a grey sky. Rains fall in a natural lullaby, bringing sleep to happy eyes. Love grows amongst the dunes, sea driven wind sings a sigh. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What lovely sweet images this conjures up. I can almost picture myself there. Lovely poem If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Magnus, very lovely write. Your images are wonderful and I love the sea, so was there with every word.  Thank you!~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes, it is indeed another night filled with your romantic poems. I could almost feel arms wrapped aroung me. *sigh* I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tracey, I am pleased that you enjoyed this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sunshinemist, Is your name Marie? thank you for your kind words. love continues on a distant shore. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Startime....pleased to give you something to sigh about. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Caught from behind by strong arms, whirling around. Giggling as kisses become part of one’s face. Tongues tickling and sharing a delightful taste. Gentle strokes of wind blown hair across a lover’s face. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH MY!! *sigh*...Is it warm in here? WOW!! ~tight hugs...Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy....I love when you post....You are so enthusiastic....puts a smile on one's face. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW this is amazing.....brings me back to the shores, and the many nights spent there....thank you.... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....just came back to see if you're still smiling!  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Magnus, I loved the softness of this. Your words make me.....oh never mind Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now this is romantic sigh, you got it all in this one keeping this one!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love's story beautifully retold LOvely Liz |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oooops forgot that damn library button again  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Enchantress....yes I am still smiling. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Greeneyes...yes the sea shore is a wonderful place. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dee, I am pleased that you enjoyed this little piece of romance. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Susan ..... Now you have had all of the pieces that you asked for....glad you enjoyed this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Liz....this was a fun write too. Glad you liked the read. |
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