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When You're Gone
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When You're Gone |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This will be my last posting here) When You're Gone By: Noah Eaton 10/3/01 I've cried an ocean of tears To see a single dream come true of my own I want you to sit next to me so badly So I know I'm not alone I wish I could talk to you Brighten my mood when I am feeling blue It's hard for me to cope these days When my heart's crying for you Should I hold onto my dreams? Should I clave them in twain? I want to be loved I can't heal this pain Sometimes I feel scared That no one would want me I hold onto that child inside of me But I feel so dreary When you're gone Tears fall down my cheeks This whole world is made for us all But I can't help but cry in my bed it seems When you're gone My heart wants you so badly There's a big space in my heart that feels broken Filled with all my love for you... I wish I was holding your hand Feeling the warmth of your heart Will I ever get to see you for real? Will we always be left apart? Should I hold onto my dreams? Should I clave them in twain? I want to be loved I can't heal this pain Sometimes I feel scared That no one would want me I hold onto that child inside of me But I feel so dreary When you're gone Tears fall down my cheeks This whole world is made for us all But I can't help but cry in my bed it seems When you're gone My heart wants you so badly There's a big space in my heart that feels broken Filled with all my love for you... My heart wants you so badly... My heart...wants you... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a beautiful poem of longing for a love that binds your heart. I don't know why this poem is your last Noah, but I wish you well in whatever you are doing, and hope you will come to visit, and come back one day, your work will be missed by me. Take care. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is a beautiful poem, Noah. I will be sad to see you go. Hope it won't be for long. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Noah, This is a beautiful, longing love poem that I really enjoyed. Your words are captured beautifully. I hope this will not be your last.  Wishing you peace and God' Blessing ~hugs~ Marie smiles ~Marie~ |
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dolphin New Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 5Florida, USA |
Oh how well I relate. Beautiful words. I have trouble expressing my own emotions sometimes, but your words have conveyed exactly how I feel as word. An excellent display of true sorrow. "Love is like pi - natural, irrational, and very important." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so heartfelt. I have felt like this too. But why will this be your last posting here? Hopefully you'll not be gone for long, and will come back with some new poetry. And happy birthday in a couple of weeks. Come back and we'll throw a party for you  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Mysteria: Thank you so much for your beautiful comment; I love your beautiful fantasy poems always, and will say depending on how others respond Startime: I've missed you so much; I'm glad you're still writing, and miss you back at the meadow and AspiringPoets. How has Erin been? Tell her I said Hi, and have a beautiful evening! Sunshinemist: Oh, thank you so much! I don't this to be my last; really; I just feel that hardly anyone here enjoys reading what I write; I've never gotten more than 8 comments on a poem here, and I feel unspecial. But if you and everyone really loves me the way you do, I'll stay forever! :-) Dolphin: Thank you so so much! I have been feeling depressed about being all lonely and turning 18 years old on the 28th of October, and how my youth has slipped away. That's what's been making me feel depressed. God Bless You, sweet dolphin! Tracey: OH MY GOSH, how did you know my birthday was coming up? (big hugggssssss) Would you really do that for me? (smiles) Thank you for the sweet compliemnt; it's wonderful people like you who encourage me to stay! Let's wait and see what others have to say! |
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