Open Poetry #16 |
![]() ![]() |
The Love Flute |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() The Love Flute By: Noah Eaton 10/14/01 Come to my window, my sweet ladylove Hear this song my spirit cries This oriole within warbles to your beauty Together may we make verses for sweet life Wrap yourself in my blanket I wield Hold me close to your beating heart I dote upon Hear the sparrows amass between our hedonistic spirits Fluttering their wings in every tear and every smile fond Through the Mother Spirit Wind, I recite my billet-doux Where the sheep will cry and the horse will invoke You are my lady sparrow I fancy to nest beside Your heart is the one I'll always hold Through the Great Spirit, my heart cries in mirth Each time I hold your hand, looking into your soft opal eyes Come to my window on this electric whimsical eve In the song of the Love Flute may we be lovingly intwined... |
||
© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved | |||
The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Noah, you write the most exqusite poetry, this is for you! ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
||
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Noah, A wonderful, uplifting and romantic poem. I really enjoy the thought of the spirits ferrying us humans along, the good spirits. Peace to you. Corinne |
||
Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah, the flute. One of my favorite instruments, with notes so lyrical and magical. And this poem is also quite magical. Your muse helps you create such lovely tunes. Have you ever heard these CD's, R.Carlos Nakai, 'Canyon Trilogy', or Coyote Old Man, 'Tear of The Moon'? I think you would enjoy both. |
||
Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ The Voice Of The Wood speaks well through your penning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah, this is wonderful... *smiles* ~Tier |
||
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Come to my window on this electric whimsical eve In the song of the Love Flute may we be lovingly intwined... So eloquent Noah!!! I imagined Pan right outside my window....Simply enchanting. Sincerely, Regina |
||
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful love song. So prettily penned If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL!!! ~Hugs, NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
||
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gosh, I love this, it's gorgeous! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |