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Meet Me In The Moonlight
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Meet Me In The Moonlight |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Meet Me In The Moonlight Silence descends as birds fly to their nest Cricket voices sing in the evening air Sounds are hushed as all settle in to rest The forest creatures come out of their lair Sweet winds now blow in gentle caresses To whisper in leaves while shadow extends The sky turns violet as night progresses Daylight is softened as nature intends I see silhouettes of trees in the dark As I gaze at the star filled skies above Hearing the sweet song of the meadow lark Taking the path leading to my true love I can see you there as I hoped tonight Praying you would meet me in the moonlight Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is some lovely sweet verse Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
StarTime Such wonderfully romantic images you have weaved within your magical words. I loved this piece. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Lovely write.  Enjoyed! So romantic. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
enjoyed the read |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely startime..very romantic.. nicely done~Victoria~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Beautiful...in the moonlight. |
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PoetryLuvR Junior Member
since 2001-07-27
Posts 16Ca, USA |
wow, as a hopeless romantic this went straight to my heart I loved it, thank you so much. see! true romance isn't measured in dollar signs, its a moment, a feeling, an experience, a setting, and a little moonlight goes a long way |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Startime, this sounds like the most beautiful place to meet your lover. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Startime....This is a very beautiful and so well said poem of romance and love. Thank you for giving this to us, for it is so nice. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a romantic moonlit night you presented with this one.  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The moonlight is a guiding force for me, I remember this piece and it still strikes home, Thank you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ This is simply lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A very lovely, and romantic poem! Deb |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Karen ... this is just lovely! What a wonderfully picturesque journey, beautiful visuals, nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
moonlight lights our way strolling together in love softening resolve Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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