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From Sleep Till Wake
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From Sleep Till Wake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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From Sleep till Wake In sleep to wake I watch the dawn Till silk greens grass the mist of mourn. Till sun spills light of golden cream Undressing night and dreamers dream. Glory marches across the field Collecting dew for heavens yield. And I am lost in ghostly light Within the awe that changed the night I weep in silence close my eyes And hear the waling of my sighs The air stays still and salved my will Until my sighing heart stands still I feel her hand embrace my cheek And down my face leak tears of weak While phantom odors fill my wile And cast my face in nubile smile. I gate before her spirits light And wait the coming of the night. To stroke the feathers of my dove To feel the essence of her love And sigh my humble prayer to God To lie with her neath goldenrods To sail with her eternals sea And fuse with her as one to be. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Man alive, Sy. This is incredible! I love the way you write. Your turn of phrases is pure genious. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Forever fresh comes to light your write as you cavort your wend of pen never hold so tight your bright and bend for time forever's when... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such love flows from your pen drawing your reader into a world filled with magic. The tender weeping of your eyes touches the heart of the one you love showing her the true man whose heart holds her so dear. *sigh* I love this poem. It brought tears to my eyes to read the love you have for your lady. Magnificent. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Gentle spirit ... it doesn't get much prettier than this~ 'Till sun spills light of golden cream Undressing night and dreamers dream.' *Hugs* n' other fancy stuff~  Love your word-weaves~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg, Flattery will get you everywhere. Thank you my friend. Decaflame, A wonderful responce, thank you. *L* Startime, Thank you sweet poetess. Marge, You are a love, got your Email and love the embellishment of my poem. Can't thank you enough. Unless you want to come down here and I'll give you a real big kiss and hug. Love Sy |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
So incredibly romantic and beautiful. What a way with words you have. Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you dear Deb, |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
In sleep to wake I watch the dawn Till silk greens grass the mist of mourn. Till sun spills light of golden cream Undressing night and dreamers dream To wake up like this......I'd be afraid I'd died and gone to heaven. This poem in its entirety is so very close to what I believe to be the gates. Resplendent Sy! Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I can't think of any words that would do justice to this poem. This is incredibly beautiful. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In sleep to wake I watch the dawn Till silk greens grass the mist of mourn. Till sun spills light of golden cream Undressing night and dreamers dream. Glory marches across the field Collecting dew for heavens yield. And I am lost in ghostly light Within the awe that changed the night ================================== The air stays still and salved my will Until my sighing heart stands still I feel her hand embrace my cheek And down my face leak tears of weak ===================================== I gate before her spirits light And wait the coming of the night. To stroke the feathers of my dove To feel the essence of her love And sigh my humble prayer to God To lie with her neath goldenrods To sail with her eternals sea And fuse with her as one to be. ====================================== My goodness Sy-babes...you make it REAL HARD to single out lines in this... this is AWESOME...what an equisitely beautiful poem of imagery and a hearts intend...and you KNOW I am smiling at LJA's "genious" reply....  (love being proven right)this is a (OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)poem--times 10. rhyme sublime and Sy-making me *sigh* In to my Sy-butterfly collection it shall go. *S* *winkiewinkie*  me This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Tenderly Awesomely Romantically Writtenly o yuh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Resplendent is a word I shall cherish, thank you. Tracey, Now that is flattery, thank you. JM, You ride my awesome like a boom And often bring me near to swoon. Winkiewinkie Stinky Wayoutwalt, A way out response, thank you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully and magnificently written Seymour, I thoroughly enjoyed! Maree  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you so much Dark Angel. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, this calls for a standing ovation and an oh my! I really am at a loss for words, this is gorgeous Into my library this goes~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo!! This one is to read again and again. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellisa, It is an honor to be in your library, thank you. *L* Nightshade, A warm thank you Chris. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- This is gorgeous writing, my friend. I really enjoyed reading this...just beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How did I miss this one? Sy...this is perfect....perfect enough to make me swoon.... ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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