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From Our Lingering Kiss
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From Our Lingering Kiss |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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There have been so many poems about kissing that I just couldn't resist writing one too. I hope you enjoy it. From Our Lingering Kiss His arms open to embrace me drawing me to his heart I gazed at him with lover's plea my desire to impart His pulse beats steady 'neath my hand life's basic rhythm, strong Lips parted in silent demand singing a timeless song His lips descend to claim the prize granting me total bliss I see the passion in his eyes from our lingering kiss Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Kelley_Edwards Junior Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 21USA |
"I see the passion in his eyes from our lingering kiss" That is when you know he truly loves you...very warm and loving...nice one!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karen - This is a perfect portait of a woman's heart. It beautifully describes my Lorelei's demand for my kisses. I think I understand better now why she needs those kisses. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sounds like fun........I must try it. WHooooa ITS FUN. Stay warm Jon All these moments |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Kelly....yes it shows in the eyes. *grin* and someday I will get to see that look. Thank you so much for your comment. LngJhnAg....*giggling* your Lorelei needs lots of kisses, sweet man.....fill her eyes with the dreams and passions she so deserves. Thank you, so much, for your comment. Jon....isn't it wonderful what the imagination can do. I was so inspired by poems about kisses that kissing filled my dreams and I just had to write this. I am glad you enjoyed it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ What a fun and romantic piece~ Enjoyed the write and the inspiration~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, That poetic kiss sure warmed me up. *L* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yup, Yup, Yup...definitely enjoyed it!! I mean the poem...too! Loved it me friend...the poem too! jwesley |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Kisses are like fingerprints all are different. I love this one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like to write em and I like to read em...may all your kisses be special ones...James |
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Shangrala New Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 3 |
Very nice poem, now I am inspired to write one of my own.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Shangrala |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vewwwwy vewwwwy bootiful, I enjoyed this Startime. Thank You. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
StarTime This was marvellous and I felt myself being swept away with the romance of your writing. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nice one! Kisses are great, expecially when they linger. ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely kiss you write. Think I'll dream me one like this in my dreams tonight If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love lingering kisses....sure do!! Nice! ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Startime, Can't be too many poems about kisses. Nicely done. But does it count if your eyes are open? |
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