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Open Poetry #16

As night falls

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-16 07:45 AM

During the day
I've been firm
on my decision
Breaking up was
for the best
But as night
fall
my feet get cold
So I put on my socks
make coffee
and think of you
I warm up
searching my soul
for what I've done wrong
Romantizing the memories
of you
A tear in my eye
reminds me
how much I miss you
my only man
my only love

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-16-2001).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2001-10-16 09:03 AM

This is sad. But very well written. I know what it's like to miss someone.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-10-16 11:15 AM

Walker~
Sad ... a good cup of coffee and socks just don't make it, eh ?
Enjoyed your thoughts~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-16 11:24 AM

*sigh* my heart goes out to you. Empty arms can never be filled with coffee and socks. Time heals, or so I am told. Take care.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

4 posted 2001-10-16 11:30 AM

strange how differently we see things in day and then later in night.
nicely done.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2001-10-16 11:34 AM

This was very sad but a very good read too!!!!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-10-16 11:52 AM

Walker,
A heart warming write, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-16 11:57 AM

Keep those warm sox on in the daytime, for a while anyway. I hear you in this one. I'll drink an extra warm coffee for you today.

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