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Deportation
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Words break free from branches - really flesh beating warm and wishing, oh today is a filling. A kitty sleeps alongside a revelation peaking, the intensity only grows for those awake. It washes over the coats of the unaware and dreaming. Words, fall and bruise as harvest fruit and I withstand the deportation. My energy gathers in trunks, blossoms resting somewhere underneath the pink and running bark, refueling. Yet I hear the voice of war screaming to my left, and I sustain living in ties. Oh today is filling me, every crevice cradling information gathered then denied. Soon I will be naked here, in the dead cold of winter. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Incredibly powerful emotion in this poem. Such a sense of pain. Your words are written to touch the reader deeply and make them feel the dark place where your soul is hurting. Absolutely magnificent writing. I pray that the light of love comes to fill all the dark and painful places in your heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Angst. The depth of feeling the pain of the world's chaos, expressed in your unique style. I love reading your rare poems. 'Words, fall and bruise as harvest fruit and I withstand the deportation.' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very unique and captivating style. Enjoyed. ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Spitfire--You always touch the core of feeling with your words...peace to you, as you always wish to others. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're right. . .you don't get here often enough. . . but when you do. . . you make an impression. . .  excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh you are incredible, it is sooo refreshing reading you hon. Words, fall and bruise as harvest fruit and I withstand the deportation. Fantastic A! Maree p.s waiting for the next one |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so glad I found your work, and I am sitting with my mouth open at the intensity in your writing. This was a magnificant piece of poetry. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Words can't say it, SF...so will just say I WAS HERE, I SAW, and added it to my soul. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Roots live on despite a harsh surrounding and life lay there cradled from harm's view, it's silent calm protects from war's sounding 'till kinder spring attires peace renewed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is feeling so strong and stressed, all ok, S? Sandra |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it's for suredly winter at passions o yuh cool write yuh |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love the way you weave, always powerful and emotive! Take care my friend! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Exceptional write, my friend. This one seems to emit a sadness, yet I see a hope for the future. Nicely done. I hope all is well with you, my friend. Give that kitty a big hug for me! All writing comes |
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