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Look Away...
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Look Away... |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Don't look at me You don't know what your existence means When you look at me.. you bring back memories naturally Please look away Leaving my mind the memories to evade Maybe when I'm lonely I'll dig them up one day You know I'm not strong enough To look away from you With time I'll be healed enough To disover someone new Though we are living separate lives I think a part of you Doesn't want to let go of our times Don't look at me like that I'll repeat breathlessly Must you do this to me? Let me keep on pleading Those eyes that gaze into mine are more than misleading You get my attention without releasing a single word You body language speaks for itself A little more than preferred! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Good write, Rosepetal!  Enjoyed~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a good read!!!!!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You body language speaks for itself A little more than preferred! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wow...I enjoyed this, I did! ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh. . . why do we still look?? who knows? great job here RosePetal. . . it's something that we've all been through. . .and you tell it well. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank You for all the replies : ) Hi Windwalker, glad u enjoyed, nice to meet you!! And Sven..I know why you look..I have control over your mouse, my gravity takes over it and makes it click on ROSEPETAL heheheh |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sometimes we just can't help ourselves. You have put this so very well. I can relate to it perfectly. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Oh no doubt! I like this poem a lot. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
RosePetal, I know eyes like the one's you speak of here. If you gaze to long into them, well, game over. Good one, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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