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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Concentration is hard because all I think about is you So many changes are happening in my life but you are my focal point Sometimes I wonder if I should tell you that I love you I love the thoughts of your eyes and your smile I want to hold you tonight forever and always Will we ever be together? Only time holds the answer to what I know is true Together forever me and you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Geeee. Love, what an enchanting word....spelled so many different ways, expressing the same feelings, known by so many.....I feel a lot of love being expressed within this poem....Thank you for sharing it. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Magnus You are welcome. :-) Thanks for reading. ~Laura~ |
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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
I enjoyed your poem very much, it was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
White, I'm glad you liked it. :-) Laura |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Sometimes its hard to let them know you LOVE them and some times your better off not letting them know. I hope it all works out for you. Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Heather, Thank you. Although I don't think the person I wrote this for will ever read this poem. ~Laura~ |
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