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The Miracle of Forty-Five
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The Miracle of Forty-Five |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Miracle of Forty-Five You sailed before the wind with me In spirits air before the sea A sea of dreams and colored skies That stayed within my dreamers’ eyes. Three years I held this ghost in view With only dreams to make it true Three years I let this phantom sail Your only sense a ghost of Braille This Braille allowed my sanity It took away calamity You dwelled within my very soul And promised me I’d reach my goal. My wish to hold you in my arms Your flesh your bones your ethereal charms. To kiss me into ecstasy And finalize the fantasy. It did come true in forty-five. And we’re still here and still alive. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And still writing amazing poetry Sy! Wonderful cadence and rhyme as always ... it's such a treasure to read the flow through your words. Beautiful reminisence in this lovely piece.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
HUGS... To both you and Isabelle...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
to finalize the fantasy....something we all wish... thanks SY *s...for your thoughts this morning ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful gift the two of you have shared.... Congratulations to you both! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How very pretty~ 'You sailed before the wind with me In spirits air before the sea A sea of dreams and colored skies That stayed within my dreamers’ eyes.' This piece sings of joy~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You sailed before the wind with me In spirits air before the sea A sea of dreams and colored skies That stayed within my dreamers’ eyes. ============================= Three years I let this phantom sail Your only sense a ghost of Braille ============================== You dwelled within my very soul And promised me I’d reach my goal. My wish to hold you in my arms Your flesh your bones your ethereal charms. To kiss me into ecstasy And finalize the fantasy. It did come true in forty-five. And we’re still here and still alive. ========================================= Ahhh I do so enjoy when you write for thy Rose of Suppose..thy lovely Isabelle. cadence kissed and sweetend with sincerety. "My wish to hold you in my arms Your flesh your bones your ethereal charms. To kiss me into ecstasy And finalize the fantasy." could that verse be any cooler  (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) *ww* Beautiful Stinky meThis distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love it when a man writes of his beloved. This is so tender and filled with such a gentle and true love. From me it rates a STANDING OVATION!!!Love like this that endures the test of time is the very soul of what true love really means. BRAVO!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I thank you sweet Kit. Nan, Thank you sweet, you know a man has many loves on many levels. *L* Wynter, Thank you sweet poetess. Sunshine, You are still my sunshine. *L* Marge, And you sing of love. Hugs and kisses JM, You fly around inside my heart. The part that is the true of art. Winkiewinkie Stinky Startime, I bow to your standing ovation. Thank you. |
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