Open Poetry #16 |
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....The beginnings.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
The beginnings…. dreams are silver spun silken threads finding a golden breath of wind nourished by showers, soon following sun’s rainbows and glimmering under the gift of stars until a destination embraces them bringing them to the ground where they fall onto themselves becoming a foundation from which they will grow skyward |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is beautiful....a great depiction of dreams....and what they are. True, others would write differently of them, but that is what makes us so unique. I like this poem Sunshine. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OH yeah - I think I'll plant myself a dream and water it till it sprouts, touches the sky, and blooms gloriously... ![]() ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Love the softness... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Yes ... indeedy~ This is such an offering of hope and desire to see our dreams grow~ Lovely thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
until a destination embraces them ================================ simply profound ... simply Sunshine ... Sunday's shine ![]() This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
So many dreams aren't remembered, to many unforgotten, all inspire. Enjoyed. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Now THIS brought my first HUGE smile for the day. ![]() Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* dreams......the inner part of us. Holding our deepest hopes and desires. I wonder if dreams can ever become reality or if they are ever lost in the weaving we give them. BRAVO!!!A masterpiece is this poem. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--What a wonderful way to see, with your eyes! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
growing. . . and reaching. . . wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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