Open Poetry #16 |
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The Cry |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The long haunting cry echoes off full moon, carrying into the stillness its own special tune. What is the sound that warbles such, to all that hear, it provides a touch. Some will think just a primal sound other will know what they have found. Ancient the words no one can know, except the spirits to whom they flow. The call does gather the ones around, where the meaning finds, a fertile ground. Listening to the call as it rings out, for there can be, not the slightest doubt. The spirit which lay in each human frame, knew of such when the world was untame. Mournful tone in chill night air, is only welcome to those who dare. To think inside of where they’ve been, and know they start out once again. The spirit of the wolf moves within each touch, to comfort the soul who never asked much. Only some peace, and comfort to hold, and to live their lives in a gentle mold. It may only be the breeze that reaches your ears, or that haunting cry to take your fears. . . To believe in the past, is to embrace the future..Logan [This message has been edited by Logan (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
"only some peace" yes, and comfort, well said. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now this just FLOWED, M'Lo! The stream of life and resolutions and the wisdom of you that proves itself again and again in your words. A wonderful weave.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--The path forward always comes from behind..your writing is always a spark to thought. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"To think inside of where they’ve been, and know they start out once again." I find that to know the pathway ahead requires an understanding of where it began. My wolf spirit helps keep me on my path. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Logan~ You have so many beautiful stories to tell...this one is no exception. Keep sharing that wisdom of yours, my soul soaks it up! ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, indeed, all would be most fortunate to hear again the primal sound within their own soul... this is exceptionally well done...thank you for a keeper... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and those who know shall understand.. wonderful, Logan.. ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"To believe in the past, is to embrace the future." Beautifully expressed Logan ... laced with a beauty of the past that lives within us all, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, Logan~ Your gentle phrasing calls to the sprit~ Reminding us ... we are not alone~ ![]() Always in the gentle keep of spirits of the ancient guardians Much love~ ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mournful tone in chill night air, is only welcome to those who dare. To think inside of where they’ve been, and know they start out once again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes Logan....I understand, and therefore enjoyed this piece so much. ~soft smile and a hug, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My oh MY....you don't need tough skin for this. Just lots of it so that the accolades can be heaped on like crazy.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When I'm right...I'm right ![]() ![]() (hey..it dont happen often so I'll gloat when it does) LOL From one who understands much... you pass the wisdom on to those who will come sit by the fire and hear the call...and know..... very well done sweet keeper.... the legend of the guardian is even more lovely when wrapped in your rhymes. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() and then...(because I remember) ![]() ![]() ![]() This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan, Your web of words has caught a rule, To fill the bellies of many a fool. That food to nurish a starving mind. By touching the braille of past mankind. Excellent write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Logan, as always, your words touch the heart deeply! Loved this! ~Tier |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful Logan as always. I really enjoyed this one and its wisdom. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Logan~ This is so awesome! ![]() Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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