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Open Poetry #16

Love comes and goes

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-13 08:52 PM

I've seen this place before
here we say goodbye
Tired of trying
tired if mending
Broken hearted
and exhausted
but too confortable
to break this
Afraid
of the future
alone
With tears in our eyes
we say goodbye
But with kisses
we return each time
Missing
what we've known
for so long
Our love
comes and goes

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2001-10-13 08:55 PM

walker - this is so true. wonderfully written. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2001-10-13 09:40 PM

This is very well written. And it is so true.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-13 09:49 PM

*sigh* yes, when alone we sometimes remember how good it was to be together and forget the reasons we parted in the frist place. This is very well written with so much truth in it. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-10-14 12:46 PM

Damn walker, you sure hit a nerve with this one. Excellent write!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-10-14 01:21 AM

you've just described my present situation.
Its true...you want to separate from eachother but then they kiss you..and you don't have the willpower to leave..
good poem walker.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-10-14 01:23 AM

How true this is for so many people.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-10-14 04:15 AM

Enjoyed walker...James

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