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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-13 03:17 PM



Oh sweet poetess, so full of life
writing words with such eloquence,
a constant sharing your gift of heart
always writing with perfect cadence.

You write words so full of sorrow
as you tell your journey of tears,
you touch deeply into our hearts
giving the widsom of your years.

Oh gentle poetess, so very full of love
sharing words of heart , making time stand still,
you bare your inner soul for the world to see
delicately penning your words with quill.

Written in your everlasting words
I share your joys, I share your strife,
and through your treasure of words
you share your spirit... you share your life.



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-13-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-13 03:19 PM


STANDING OVATION!!!This is a wonderful poem that speaks so well of your ladies of Passion. A magnificent read that I know will touch all their hearts.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-10-13 03:57 PM



This circles us all...thank you dear one!

Sven
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3 posted 2001-10-13 07:15 PM


you know that I really love this one. . . since I have been here. . . I have learned much from them all. . . and because of them, I am a better person, a better poet, and a good friend. . .

thank you all. . . and thank you GS for the opportunity to say this. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-13 07:27 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is such a lovely tribute to the ladies out here.  I'm sure they will all appreciate it....and you are an important link in the circle!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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5 posted 2001-10-13 09:53 PM


"I share your joys, I share your strife,
and through your treasure of words
you share your spirit... you share your life"

That says it all, and so nicely. Smiles and hugs to you and all the sisters of these pages.

The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-10-13 11:30 PM


and we thank YOU!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-10-13 11:40 PM


This is such a lovely way to share your feelings. Everyone here shares so much in their writings.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-10-13 11:50 PM



This is beautiful and well expressed, but, then again, I'm biased   Thank you and hugs!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2001-10-14 11:17 AM


Oh sweet poetess, so full of life
writing words with such eloquence,
a constant sharing your gift of heart
always writing with perfect cadence
=================================

YES ... YOU DO  
very sweet and sincere GS...
a lovely tribute and a beautiful poem of kind intend

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Nan
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10 posted 2001-10-14 11:24 AM


Your Gentle Spirit shines through...
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2001-10-14 11:34 AM


What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to the many exceptional women of Passions, Gentle Spirit! This is so lovely, very much enjoyed these genuine sentiments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-14-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-10-14 03:51 PM


How sweet, thoughtful, and beautiful this is!  I read your tribute to the guys of passions and I am pleased to see that you've penned one for the ladies : )
Thank you. WE love YOU

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-10-15 11:34 AM


Each one of you is a jewel that shines in their own right! I thank you for the beauty you all share.......always.  Hugs to all.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
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14 posted 2001-10-15 12:41 PM


Yes they are all that and more!  Wonderful!
Topheth
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15 posted 2001-10-15 01:32 PM


DITTO

Domzi
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16 posted 2001-10-15 04:08 PM


Wonderfully penned poem for the ladies.
Thanks!

Dee
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17 posted 2001-10-15 05:36 PM


Gentle Spirit, such sweet words for the ladies here.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Trillium
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18 posted 2001-10-15 06:53 PM


What a great tribute to the ladies of Passions! Thank you for writing such lovely sentiments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Gentle Spirit
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19 posted 2001-10-16 12:50 PM


Each a jewel
in their own right
I thank them all
for sharing their light!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

rwood
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20 posted 2001-10-17 07:19 AM


May the circle be unbroken. I see so much talent and love in this forum. I've grown to appreciate every facet of ladyship there is. There is always a new one...yet unchanging in the way we share. Beautiful words for beautiful ladies!

Sincerely,
Regina


Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 2001-10-17 07:26 AM


Beautiful and touching tribute to the magic of Passions, and also a mirror of the gentlemen of the circle of poetry.
Thank you for sharing your kind words
Liz

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
22 posted 2001-10-17 07:40 PM


A delicate bump for the ladies of passions.   They too are more than deserving.    

[This message has been edited by sigheyes (edited 10-17-2001).]

SmartChick
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23 posted 2001-10-17 09:48 PM


This is a beautiful poem. Thank you!
Gentle Spirit
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24 posted 2001-10-18 03:53 PM


and again, my sincere and humble thanks.
peace to all.
donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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