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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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0 posted 2001-10-13 03:20 AM

Step with me, then
through muggy fog
our footsteps silence
song of frog...
past the stump of cypress knee
into the bog past hermit's keep
forget the shadows in the wood--
keep eyes on path, where they should
remain lest lust deceive the eye
already blind by tears I've cried
So walk with me into the wood...

Within a circled fairyring,
there you'll dance--
I'll clap and sing
stories told on harp and string
in harmonies the fairies bring.

May the moonbeams spark the leaves
a spotlight of our dance, reprieve.
Skyclad circles in the wood
together, as we knew we would.

I'll come again when you are gone
if only just to hum the song...
clasping knees in rock of tears
the memory of lack of fear
I'll keep the dirt you danced upon
each mote--a note of this night's song.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-10-13 03:27 AM

"I'll come again when you are gone
if only just to hum the song..."

And you hum all night long, serenity, sister to the midnitesun.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2001-10-13 12:15 PM

This was a good read!!!!!!!

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

3 posted 2001-10-13 12:22 PM

Something so visual doesn't need a picture but I had this and your verse brought so much to mind. Wanted to share it with you.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Dennis
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

4 posted 2001-10-13 01:46 PM

think I'll pass on the invite sounds a little scary but I liked the poem!!!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-10-13 04:36 PM

*giggling* a witch's dance.....sounds like just the thing for a night filled with a full moon lighting the fairie ring. This is a wonderful read.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2001-10-13 05:20 PM

I'll keep the dirt you danced upon
each mote--a note of this night's song.

Especially loved these two lines GORGEOUS one, something a true Gem would do!

Loved the poem

Maree

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-10-13 05:44 PM

Serenity,
A lovely write, I'll dance with you anytime.*L*

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-10-14 02:27 AM

Ahhh, Serenity, you always are able to take us right there in your imagery of words that lead us by the hand...very gentle smile

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2001-10-14 02:42 AM

Wonderful read
leaves me a little sad
but totally enjoyed getting there
Especially since I'm wearing one of your "Snoopy hugs"

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

10 posted 2001-10-14 02:53 AM

Serenity~ How magical...I'd love to go for a dance in a fairy ring

tell me when and where and I'll be there!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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