Open Poetry #16 |
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Two Hearts Entwined |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The light shining in your eyes Reveals the brightest shade of blue How many times we've walked these sands Arm in arm just me and you Two lovers by the seashore Who have thrown caution to the wind Within each others hearts is where Our hopes and dreams are pinned You hold my hands so delicately As our fingers interlace Then you move your lips to mine And kiss me tenderly on the face Using an old piece of driftwood We trace a heart here in the sand As the warming Summer's breeze Makes its way across the land You whisper the words 'I love you' As we gaze on out to sea Within the safety of your loving arms Is where I'll always want to be 'tho the tide will soon erase Our footprints in the sand My love for you grows stronger As our hearts now take command The light of the day is now fading As the gulls fly towards the sun Under the light of the silvery moon Is where our two hearts will become one Suetang |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You whisper the words 'I love you' As we gaze on out to sea Within the safety of your loving arms Is where I'll always want to be" ![]() Sue, this is wonderful!! ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sue~ This is very lovely and soft! ![]() Gosh, I adore romantic verse, and you write it well! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, THIS is so very beautiful. Great write. I love it!! ![]() ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful picture of love you have here. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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