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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Many days The past with slow passage goes; Simply done, Simply spun, Summer worn into fall flows, With the chill Colors fill The skies release from the trees In wind play, Drifts away, Floating with clouds on the breeze; Passing days And where you are heaven knows. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I was just thinking along these lines this afternoon as the breeze is passing through the window to where I am sitting and the clouds are forming their change....nicely done, in your own style..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts When emotions fail me, The format takes over. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Slowly, the days pass 'Til Fall shapes fill with color, floating on the breeze or Slowly, the days pass 'Til shapes filled with color, Fall floating on the breeze ~Wynter *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You are filled with the gentle touch of reminiscence today, and it fits you very well... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
But still I feel emotion in your words for do you not draw the emotion out of your reader? This is a unique poem that I enjoyed reading. Strange as it may sound it helped me put the past in perspective. Well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a wistful poem in my mind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ProfessorGloom~ 'Many days The past with slow passage goes; Simply done, Simply spun,' I found these thoughts very nicely spun~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sadly put deserves a well wishing yuh |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Professor Gloom, Oh, did I enjoy reading this flowing, elegant write!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
you do have a way with words.... ~Connie~ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
These days.......days do seem to pass at a mild jog its difficult trying to keep up! Your poem reflects this well Stay warm and gloomy.....Gloom  Jon |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is the feeling I get when that first crisp wind blows in for fall. It's a slight melancholy...to say goodbye to summer...but acceptance of the days to come. I really love this. Sincerely, Regina |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nice little breeze, Gloom. Well done. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Professor Gloom- Nicely penned thoughts, my friend. Much enjoyed.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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