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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-11 01:32 PM

electricity
links my thoughts to pen in hand
my heart speaks the words
~*~
and visually
my words travel to thy heart
resting well in place
~*~
thus two hearts have merged
thine and mine entwined in love
and beating as one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-11 01:38 PM

words seek eyes....find heart
touch gently...poetic love
come....fill my vision

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-11 01:40 PM

*clapping* this is wonderful Interloper!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-10-11 01:51 PM

Your words reach out and
grip my heart generating
a bond of inspire

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-11-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-10-11 02:10 PM

You've been away, welcome home, and many thanks...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-10-11 02:59 PM

Interloper,
Good read, enjoyed.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

6 posted 2001-10-11 03:54 PM

This reminds me of....of...oh, what is it...(I'll go check and come back)....(back)..."Meeting At Night"..by Robert Browning. Good job.

[This message has been edited by RMW (edited 10-11-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-10-11 04:13 PM

SEA ~
I hate it when the comments are better than my work

Thanx, gal

Gentle Spirit ~
Your applause is deeply appreciated. Thank you for stopping by

SK~
See my comment to SEA

1derful comment

Lady ~
And Sven was just saying I should go away again ...

Thanx for the welcome.

SY~
Always a pleasue to have you stop by

Bob~
WOW! Whut a compliment! All I have in common with him is the name

Thank you my friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

8 posted 2001-10-11 04:17 PM

Enjoyed the read. It reached out
towards my innerself.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-10-11 11:15 PM

I loved this string, beautifully done

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

10 posted 2001-10-11 11:18 PM

It grabbed my heart

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-10-11 11:19 PM

Enjoyed this string.....well done! Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-10-11 11:20 PM

an excellent string...neat, tidy and touching. Well done...

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

13 posted 2001-10-28 01:31 AM

This is a perfect nitecap2my evening
A beautiful write PoetFriend and thank you for this gem you've shared...
*~coco~*

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2001-10-28 12:22 PM

I am so glad I was able to read this. I love it. *grin* I can see why she would inspire you to write such beautiful words. She is pretty special.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2001-10-28 12:31 PM

(big hugggsssssss) So very beautiful and touching these soft inspiring poems are! (sigh) I love them all, you always write such beautiful words from the heart! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2001-10-28 12:37 PM

Beautifully done, Interloper. You do have a talent for these!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

17 posted 2001-10-28 02:33 PM

l!!!

Love and peace
Maggie ((~.~))

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

18 posted 2001-10-28 03:43 PM

Interloper,

Truly beautiful.

Dawn

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