Open Poetry #16 |
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Luna Whispers |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Moonlight shimmers soft upon the lake as Luna holds her head majestically high, watching as mother nature goes to sleep embraced in moonbeams the eagle does fly. On this eve' the winds remain calm the crickets make a melodious sound, moonlight filters through the stars stardust lands gently upon the ground. All on earth is well this peaceful night as Luna whispers acrossed the skies, shhh...rest now earth, it's time to sleep... dream serenely, for God is nigh. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-11-2001).] |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
pale, sweet moon above whisper softly as I sleep and awake to peace Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I thought your muse was gone ![]() this is LUNA LOVELY ... wonderful imagery here GS keep em coming ![]() When your own emptiness is all that's getting through |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
moon's glow soothing slow and through the windows beaming thoughts of you, dreaming |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gentle Spirit, Lovely as usual. Reminds me of what my mother used to say, "God's in His heaven and all's right with the world." Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A lovely poem Gentle Spirit Jon ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Interloper, may we all awake in peace......always. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Janet, I believe my muse snuck back for the night just to tease me, and left again!! Thanks hon, I will try to keep em coming..*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
awww Sunshine......that was lovely, thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris, your mother had much wisdom. Thanks for leaving your thoughts. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Jon, thank you for the kind words. It is appreciated. ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a wonderful lullabye GS. . . may we always sing it. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
the crickets make a melodious sound, moonlight filters through the stars stardust lands gently upon the ground." *sigh* what a perfect piece to be reading at this time of night. Simply lovely... Sweet dreams! ![]() ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your verse glitters with your heart and the moon is just trying to keep up! Lovely! Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"dream serenely, for God is nigh." What a wonderfully tender verse, Gentle Spirit ... this is so uplifting, thank you! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Balladeer, I loved it! Thanks hon! *warm smiles* Sven, May that song always be of peace. Krista, may yours be just as sweet, thank you. Regie, Thank you my kindred spirit... My heart glitters from the happiness you share. Kit, I am glad that you found it uplifting. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all, as Luna softly whispers, GOODNIGHT. ~peace to all~ On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
A lullabye that will put the world to sleep, at peace. Hugs. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nice dont skip a beat |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Such lovely images in whispers~ Love the Luna spirit your muse brought you to share~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
SE, sleep well. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Walt, I'll try not to. Thanx On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am glad that my muse and I could give you whispered images today Marge.......oh.... and by the way.... HAPPY BIRTHDAY On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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