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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Hand in Hand Speak softly to me, subdue me in your shadings, tender me to your warmth and I am yours. Yield me to your touch, I am moldable, conformable, submissive to the whispers of your heart. Feel me your undertone, sense me through your consciousness, and I will come away, Yours. ~Wynter ...thank you LoveLetters for the early morning thoughts "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good morning and these are thoughts for a rainy day here, I enjoyed them as I wake up to coffee. I like that last line, especially. Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Irish, I was just reading someone elses poem and speaking softly came to my mind *s...not raining here yet... and finally warmed up a bit. ((hugs)) ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. Raining here!!!!!!!!!!YUCK Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Wynter~ Softly divine...I felt the whispers settling on my heart....very beautiful writing here. Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Now I got a guidebook to Women o yuh hehehe is it really that easy? good write |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I I enjoyed these word thank you for writing this poem!!!!!!!!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - Speak softly to me, subdue me in your shadings, tender me to your warmth and I am yours. Whispers will I do, shade you from harm, touch to yours, I am yours... Yield me to your touch, I am moldable, conformable, submissive to the whispers of your heart. Tender is my name, hear what I say, caress from afar, touching my heart... Feel me your undertone, sense me through your consciousness, and I will come away, Yours. Knowing you is treasures, through and through, I am awake with you, and I am yours... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your beautiful heart shines in this beautiful piece that sings like music! (big hugggsssss) May you always walk hand in hand and waltz on the heavens! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shgine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Heather..well we never got much of that rain...thank you for reading *s Krista ..thank you for that beautiful remark, I have stored it in my memory bank of inspirations. wayoutwalt..it is really that easy...for me, I can't vouch for the feelings of other women *s WindWalker...thank you very much. and BC ...you always speak softly to me..sometimes I wish you were nearer. I won't be coming to Florida, my mother has decided to sell and move to Tenn...;(I am feeling a little bit lost... hugss M Noah..always walking hand in hand at least with a pen in one of them..*s I would like to "waltz on the heavens" sometime...a sweet thought. Thank you again. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ This is just some-kind-of-pretty~ Darn it on the 'I won't be coming to Florida' ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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